Showing posts with label Cindy McDonald. Show all posts
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Wednesday, July 10, 2024

Long Lost Lies by C. S. McDonald Attracted by the Cover - Only to Find Another, and Maybe the Best, Owl's Nest Mystery!

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Killjoy June 10, 1958… 
Weaving through the party guests, Estelle Bartoli checked the time on her brass pocket watch dangling from a gold chain around her neck. For twenty years, she’d served as the head housekeeper for the Whitaker family. Naturally, Estelle was no stranger to elegant events at Wind Song Mansion, where six generations of Whitakers had lived and made their fortune in river transportation. Currently, Gavin Whitaker was at the helm of the Whitaker Barge Company. He reined over fifteen fleets of towboats and barges, dry dock cleaning, and dry dock stacking. Four years ago, Pittsburgh’s most eligible and wealthiest bachelor married Miriam Williams. The Williams family owned two massive marine ways, cranes, and equipment to execute underwater and topside marine repairs. Needless to say, Gavin’s mother was relieved and overjoyed with the union. At the time, her only child and heir to the Whitaker fortune was closing in on forty. 
This evening, Gavin was throwing a thirtieth birthday party for his beautiful wife. Fortunes combined, Gavin and Miriam Whitaker were one of Pittsburgh’s most elite socialites, and everyone who was anyone in the Iron City was in attendance this night. Estelle nodded respectfully at the mayor as she passed. Glancing across the vast room, she spotted Miriam’s parents showing off their nine-month-old granddaughter, Sarah, to the city council president and his wife. Good. Riona Connery, the baby’s nanny, was getting a much-needed break. Lord knows the poor girl was trapped in the nursery with barely any time to herself. At seventeen years old, Riona was loving, attentive, and patient with the child. Estelle had her doubts when Miriam hired the girl, yet over the past six months, Riona proved herself competent and unfailing. Sarah was a happy baby, always smiling, as she was for the councilman. A peel of laughter from the far corner of the room caught Estelle’s attention. It appeared several wives of council members had a little too much wine. Gathered in a tight circle, they were giggling like naughty schoolgirls. Disgraceful. Regardless, the party was going perfectly. The wait staff Estelle had prudently hired to cover the event was performing eloquently. Each guest had a drink in hand. The appetizers Angus had created were delicious, and soon the champagne would be flowing, and the cake would be served. That is, when Gavin decided to set the cigars and the cues aside to emerge, with his friends and business associates, from the billiards room. Searching the crowd, Estelle set eyes on Miriam, looking lovely, as usual, and chatting with guests. 
Just then, someone sneezed, and another sneeze, and then a rapid succession of sneezing, followed by wheezing. “Are you alright?” Estelle heard someone inquire, and then she saw Miriam excuse herself from her conversation to wind through the throng of guests toward the wife of the conductor for the Pittsburgh Symphony. Lotte was easing down on the pink and gold striped French sofa. She was having some kind of attack. Miriam sat down next to the woman, gently cupping her shoulder. “What’s going on, Lotte?” The woman pressed a handkerchief to her nose. “Spring allergies, I’m afraid. It seems something in this room is really getting to me.” She nodded toward a large vase filled with roses. “The roses, perhaps?” Somewhere in the house, there was a loud pop! Miriam flinched. Lotte’s eyes widened, and all the guests glanced about the room. Within a moment, everyone returned to their conversations, and another round of sneezing took hold of Lotte and Miriam’s focus. Immediately, Estelle gestured to a waiter. “Get rid of those roses,” she instructed, in a heavy Italian lilt. Setting his tray on a nearby table, the young waiter obliged. Yet, the wheezing intensified. Estelle’s suspicions were mounting that Lotte’s ailment was caused by something else in the house, and she had a feeling she knew what it was. “Are you allergic to cats?” she inquired. Another sneeze. “Oh, yes, they are the worst. I can’t breathe if there’s a cat about,” Lotte croaked. “Oh, dear, we have a cat, a Himalayan, but she spends most of her time upstairs in the nursery with Riona and the baby. Zsa Zsa loves our Sarah, and she’s quite fond of the nanny, too,” Miriam explained. A young woman approached to hand Lotte a glass. “Here, drink this. It’s tonic water.” Smiling and nodding a thank you, Lotte took the glass and sipped. “I saw a young girl walking in the gardens earlier. A cat was following her. It was so beautiful. A Himalayan, you say?” the woman inquired. “Yes, that’s our Zsa Zsa. She’s very beautiful, and I’m certain she was following our nanny, Riona. The cat follows her everywhere. They were probably out for a bit of fresh air,” Miriam expounded. 
“That cat shouldn’t be around the baby,” Estelle put in sternly. “Cats have been known to steal an infant’s breath and cause crib death.” Miriam waved a dismissive hand. “That’s just an old wives’ tale, Estelle.” “Nonetheless, my dear, if there’s a cat in the house, I must be going. Can you find my husband and have our car brought round, please?” Lotte requested in a hoarse voice. Miriam patted Lotte’s knee. “Certainly.” She lifted her gaze to meet Estelle’s. Now it was Miriam’s tone that was stern. “Notify the maid that we need the maestro’s car brought round right now. And have one of the waiters go into the billiards room to get him straightaway.” “Yes, ma’am,” Estelle said, and with that, she made her way across the room, stopping to send a waiter to the billiards room. Almost to the foyer, she felt a tap on her shoulder and turned to find a waiter with his silver serving tray folded against his chest. The tall, skinny, redheaded boy with acne covering his youthful face shifted from one foot to the other, as if he had something to say but didn’t know how to breach the subject. “Si?” “Um…Mrs. Bartoli, we’re out of…um, chardonnay. Where would I get more?” Cocking an eyebrow, Estelle clasped the gold chain around her neck and squeezed. “There’s none on the buffet in the dining room where all the wines are set up?” The boy fidgeted. He dropped his gaze to the floor. “No, ma’am.” Estelle tossed her hands in the air. “Che dolore!” Around an annoyed sigh, she added, “Angus must not have brought enough up from the cellar. Come. We’ll have him fetch more. You’ll need to go with him to help carry the wine up from the basement.” “Yes, ma’am,” the young man stammered. Estelle and the waiter weaved through the guests, until they stepped into the immense foyer where the young house maid stood at a narrow podium stationed beside the tall, double mahogany doors. The setting sun’s rays glimmered through the beveled glass, casting colorful prisms over the parquet floor. “Tessa, have a valet bring the maestro’s car round, immediatamente,” Estelle instructed, and then through the door’s side windows, her gaze caught sight of a blue convertible accelerating away from the house. Her brows furrowed. “A guest has gone already?” “Yes. Mr. Williams requested his car just a few moments ago.” She reached for the telephone affixed to the wall next to the door. “Mrs. Whitaker’s brother? Why?” Estelle asked. Her Italian tone was on the edgy side of insulted. “One of the boys got hurt, and they’re taking him to the hospital,” the girl replied. Rolling her eyes, Estelle flicked the very tips of her fingers under her chin. “Non mi interessa. Those boys are nothing but trouble.” She swung around, almost bumping into the jumpy waiter. How did this one get through my interview? With a wiggle of her forefinger, the waiter was on her heels as she proceeded through the wide corridor to the kitchen, where they found the cook, Angus Docherty. The large man stood at a long butcher-block table assembling delicate pastries onto trays. Angus’s white, double-breasted jacket barely fit. The buttons looked as if they would pop at any moment, and his belly flopped over his stained apron. Sweat beaded his brow and dribbled down his temples. His sausage-like fingers carefully cradled each pastry as he eased them onto the tray. Pausing from his chore, he picked up a champagne flute and took a greedy gulp. Estelle’s eyes popped. “Angus, did you open the champagne already?” It wasn’t a question. It was a reprimand...
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...“Who’s there?” a woman inquired from inside the apartment. “Detective Slater and Constable Mulligan,” Slater replied. The lock clicked and when the door opened, Nora stood before them with an expectant look in her eyes. “I was wonderin’ when you’d come back. What’ve ya got, then?” “May we come in?” Slater asked. Nora stepped aside to give them entry. Slater removed his fedora. Winnie followed him into the apartment. Bonnie Connery stood in the humble kitchen area, pouring hot water into two teacups. Oh, yes, Winnie remembered the woman well. When Bonnie first arrived at The Lazy Hound Pub with her family, she was a lovely, vibrant Irish woman. Full auburn tresses spilled about her shoulders, and her green eyes were always smiling, even if she wasn’t. Now, Bonnie was overtly thin. The green and white polka-dotted dress she was sporting hung loose on her boney frame, and when she turned to see who had come into her quarters, her eyes were not smiling, nor was she. Despair had drawn Bonnie’s pretty features downward. Still, the resemblance to her sister, Nora, was most apparent. Except for their eyes. Nora’s eyes were more resolute, probing. “Nora and I were about to have some tea. Can I get you some?” Like Nora, Bonnie’s Irish lilt was very heavy. “No, thank you.” Slater turned to Winnie. “Constable?” Winnie shook her head no. 

“I assume you’re Bonnie Connery.” “That I am, Detective.” Bonnie carried the cups and saucers to a tiny table, set them down, and gestured for her sister to sit. Nora obliged. “I’m sorry. I only have three chairs. Constable, would you like to sit?” Slater nodded to Winnie, and she took the third chair. He moved toward the kitchen while pulling out his pad and pen from his jacket. Setting his fedora on the counter, he leaned a hip against it. “I hope you enjoyed your shopping trip.” “We haven’t just been shoppin’, Detective. We hired a solicitor to arrange for Riona’s body to be exhumed and taken to the coroner,” Nora said. Bonnie’s gaunt face pinched in anguish as she sipped her tea. Slater exchanged glances with Winnie. “I see. Mrs. Connery, I wanted to ask you some questions about your daughter.” Closing her eyes, Bonnie nodded. “How long did Riona work at Wind Song Mansion?” Bonnie stared into her teacup. “Six months.” “Did she like working for the Whitakers?” She lifted a shoulder and let it drop. “I suppose.” The corners of Bonnie’s lips arched ever so slightly. “She adored that wee one, but it was hard for such a young lass to provide constant care like that.” Bonnie dragged her watery gaze to meet Slater’s. “Riona rarely came to visit. The Whitakers didn’t give her much time away. I missed her. I wasn’t allowed to visit. I’m not sure why.” She covered her mouth to stifle a sob. Nora gently laid her hand over Bonnie’s. Slater softened his tone. “I know this is hard. I’m so sorry, Mrs. Connery, but when Riona came to visit, did she seem on edge or uncomfortable about anything going on at the Whitakers’? Did she get along with the staff?” Bonnie shot an uncomfortable look at her sister. Nora nodded for her to expose all. With a shaking hand, Bonnie sat her cup on the saucer and lifted her gaze to meet the detective’s. 

“It was that cook. Angus Docherty, I tell ya. He was always makin’ inappropriate comments to Riona. Tellin’ her how pretty she was, suggestin’ they might go to dinner sometime. He was old enough to be her father, for God’s sake. I told her she could quit. She should come home, we’d make do somehow. She didn’t have to put up with the likes of Angus Docherty. But Riona insisted she could handle him. He was on the suspect list, ya know. Everybody thought he’d done it. That other detective was suspicious of him, I’ll tell ya. But he just…went away. I don’t know what happened to him, if he died or left the department, but I never heard another word about me daughter’s…” Her words gave way to weeping. Bonnie pulled a handkerchief from the pocket of her dress to cover her nose and mouth. 

“Detective Mark Schultz. I don’t know what happened to him, but I didn’t know the man at all. Unfortunately, all his notes disappeared, Mrs. Connery. I’m starting over with this case,” Slater said. “And you’ll get to the bottom of it, I’m tellin’ ya,” Nora said concisely. Bonnie pushed up from her seat. “I best be gettin’ downstairs. The dinner rush will be startin’ and I don’t want Molly or Winnie to have to pick up me tables. They’ve done quite enough of that.” With that, she made her way to the door, grabbed an apron from the coat hooks on the wall, and made her exit. The group remained silent while listening to Bonnie’s quick footfalls on the staircase. “We just interviewed Angus Docherty. He claims he didn’t kill Riona,” Slater said. “I see. So, when someone claims they didn’t do it, we’re supposed to say, oh, fair play, and scratch them off the suspect list, are we?” Nora bit out. “Here’s the facts, Detective: Angus Docherty had plenty of opportunity to kill me niece. Here’s how I see it: Riona came in from her walk through the kitchen because wealthy sods, like the Whitakers, don’t like the help waltzin’ through their fancy affairs. Angus lured her downstairs to show her somethin’, or to give her somethin’, but in fact, he wanted somethin’. When Riona resisted, he killed her, and dressed it all up to look like a suicide.” 

“I like it. I really do, but why would Coroner Lawson cover up a murder for a cook?” Slater threw up his hands. “Okay, maybe he’s a really good cook, but I hardly think a respected coroner is going to jeopardize his reputation for someone the Whitakers could easily replace.” “Maybe the cook had somethin’ on one of the Whitakers or the coroner himself,” Winnie put in. Nora pointed a stiff finger at Winnie. “Now you’re talkin’, Constable.” Slater raised his hands in surrender. “You might be right. That said, I think we need to look deeper than what’s on the surface.” “You’re right. So, have a seat then, Detective Slater,” Nora said. Slater obliged. “I think I’ve got somethin’ to show ya that ya haven’t seen before.” The Irish Constable stood and made her way a short distance to walk around a double bed. She picked up a briefcase, laid it on the bed to open it, and plucked a manilla envelope from inside. Returning to the table, she sat back down and slid the envelope across the table to Slater. “Take a look at those, Detective, and you too, Constable.” Slater dug into the envelope to retrieve photographs, then with furrowed brows, his gaze snapped up to meet Nora’s. “Crime scene photos? Where in God’s name did you get these?” “Look at the return address, why don’t ya.” Slater flipped the envelope over. The photographs had been sent from his precinct. “Who…” “I’ve got me contacts, and I don’t wish to share them at this time. Take a look at the first photo, the shot of Riona sittin’ against the wall. Notice where the gun is lyin’.” Winnie leaned in to see the picture. “It’s next to her right hand.” 

“That’s right. But Riona was helplessly left-handed. If she were inclined to shoot herself, which I don’t believe she was, wouldn’t the lass have used the hand she was certain of?” “I’d say yes, if you’re askin’ me,” Winnie replied. “Evidently, it’s a little detail the killer wasn’t aware of,” Nora said. Slater studied the photos closely. “That’s a Luger that’s been placed next to her hand. Where would a young girl get a Luger? Where would she get a gun in the first place, and why would she have one?” “So, you agree that she didn’t kill herself?” Nora questioned. Slater’s gaze met Nora’s. “Regardless, if she was left-handed or not, the Luger is laying in the wrong position and too close to the body.” He pointed to the photo. “See, it’s right next to her thigh. If she’d shot herself, the gun would have dropped farther away when her hand flung away from the kickback, not right next to her thigh. Yeah, someone laid her hand there and placed the gun to make it look like she’d shot herself.” He glanced over the other photos, and then hesitating on the third photo, he pointed at a spot. “What’s this? A puddle? Blood?” Nora and Winnie looked over his shoulder. “Is it a shadow?” Nora asked. “Don’t know. I haven’t had a chance to look at the original coroner’s report. We picked it up, along with the few notes I had in my desk, on the way to the interviews at Wind Song Mansion.” “I looked it over a bit while we were drivin’ along,” Winnie began. “There was no mention of gun residue at all. Not on the lass’s hand or her head. It basically said the lass died of a self-inflicted gunshot wound to the head. Not much more information, I’m afraid.” “Well, there ya have it, then. Like I said, a dodgy coroner’s report. Now, what’ve ya got in mind, Detective? Because, this time, I’ll be comin’ along,” Nora stated. Slater stood. “We’re going to see Gavin Whitaker at his office. Let’s go.” Nora and Winnie pushed up from their seats. Quickly, Nora gathered up the teacups and placed them in the sink before checking to make sure the stove was off. She handed Slater his hat and then grabbed her coat and purse from hooks next to the door. Plopping his fedora on his head, Slater held the door open for the ladies, and then the trio stepped into the hallway and headed for the staircase. Slater brought up the rear. Halfway down the stairs, Winnie stopped and turned toward Nora and Slater. “The baby was nine months old when Riona died. Bonnie said Riona was the Whitakers’ nanny for six months. So, who took care of the wee one the first three months? Why did they give up their position, and where are they now?” Slater stopped short. “Good question.” “How did ya know the baby was nine months at the time of Riona’s death?” Nora asked. “Um…I must’ve read it somewhere or someone must’ve mentioned it. I…I’m fairly good at rememberin’ little details. Part of me job, isn’t it, then?” Winnie pointed out. “Perhaps ya might not be too hasty to send this one back to Ireland, Detective Slater,” Nora stated.

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McDonald has really upped her game in her latest Owl's Nest Mystery Series... And I LOVED It! First, let's set the stage for the theme of the series... Angel Characters... I was excited to read the first book in this series... But, instead of a straight cozy mystery where readers are working along with the amateur detective in trying to sold a murder mystery, C. S. has added humor... And just like the "Who's on First?" comedy scenario, readers may begin to feel like we're running around trying to follow exactly what is happening... Because we now have two angels to keep track of... And, she ups it further by switching the ghost human partners, by including her dearest work partner to substitute for her! So, while this might be a rather fast-paced story, be prepared to slow it down to keep track of who's on first...


So, are you ready?

Alexa Owl is our main character who owns Owl's Nest Couturier Shoppe. She is normally the one who works with one of the angels--and, did I mention time travel is also involved? You see, the angels are sent back to solve cold cases! Detective Bobby Starr has been in all of the first books while he has been working to gain permanent membership in the Guardian Angel Squad... Alexa is his human contact. As of now, we the readers have not been told how Alexa happened to be that human... (if I remember right, LOL).

“We’re here today to read the last will and testament of one, Jacob Allan Burnley, a fine attorney, sharp businessman, and…um…well, he was a human being.”

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This time, however, there is a case in the present. And it involves Alex's sister, Natalyn La Pearle. She has been accused of killing her boss...in her bed...with a knife... Twelve Times... 

Now here's the twist. Alex is involved with Detective Cliff Slater, the primary homicide officer. However, since Alex's sister is the accused and also intimate with Cliff, he has been cut out of the case. And, of course, that means that Alex, who has been used to helping with cases for many years, with Starr, she refuses to be excluded from working this most important case... Obviously Cliff will help... In this book, Detective Starr gets to meet the real Cliff Slater and immediately starts comparing him to his grandfather... The new angel in training...

Detective Errol Jones has been assigned her sister's case and even though Cliff is a good cop, Jones wants to play it straight to exclude Cliff, or Alex... But, since this is Jones' first murder case, Cliff asked for and got the chance to work along with him... Thankfully... Because it was quite clear that Jones believed that Natalyn was guilty... quickly pointing out that even the knife used was from her kitchen!

So let's head back to 1958 where we find Detective Starr with a new partner, not knowing how to deal with her, as well as the family members of the girl that had been killed and found in a wine cellar, and never having her case solved. And a persistent family member who wants to work along on the case as well. So Detective Starr introduces them as Constables who are visiting America from Ireland. And they both proved to be excellent at the details that even Starr had not seen. This cold case was solved!

One of the little plot manipulation that had to occur was that both Alex, when they traveled back in history, and for Winnie this time, was that they were replaced by Heavenly actors in their places. Now, for Alex, that didn't prove to be a problem since Winnie knew all about Detective Starr and what happened in Alex's absence... But now Winnie was being pulled back into the past. Winnie was a wonderfully outspoken individual, friendly and talking with everybody. But, could a fake Winnie fool Louie Santorini when he came calling for an evening out?

Clearly this is a character-driven novel. But the writer helps her reader by providing a list of characters at the beginning of the book, in case you need to refresh just who or what is handling which case... Seriously, it's a fun, perhaps, more complex story than the average cozy mystery, but certainly worthy of providing the warmth and concern that cozy mysteries always seem create... Highly recommended! In fact, I recommend the whole series, so if you haven't read this author yet, why not start with the first in series shown above...

And, if you like her writing as excerpted above, do check out the author by searching in the right-hand column for C. S. McDonald or Cindy McDonald. I think I've read most if not all of her books... A Favorite Author for me...

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Saturday, March 23, 2019

A Short and A Main Feature by Cindy (C.S.) McDonald! Enjoy!

When I was thinking about combining the reviews for two books I had from Cindy McDonald, I thought about how, when we used to go to the movies, we get a short, usually a cartoon, before the main feature! For whatever reason, McDonald writes her Fiona Quinn mystery series under C. S. McDonald. Personally, I find it leads to not being able to find all the books of one author, when they do that...but I digress...
Crystal Clear Confusion, just out, provides a fun short story about Fiona Quinn, the series main character. Actually, if you are interested in interpreting dreams, like I am, and become fairly good at it, you won't need to seek help, like Fiona did... You see, she was having scary dreams about being at work, alone, and discovering some horrible monster after her. Each time, it varied a little, but there was always something about which Fiona was afraid...

So when her neighbor offered to help her, using her new crystal ball that had arrived in the mail, Fiona, thought, why not?


Fiona Quinn’s hurried footfalls echoed through the empty hallway of Westwood Elementary School. The lights were off. Only the shadows of dusk fell through the large windows that lined the corridor. Where is everyone? She thought.  
She peered into the library—it was pitch dark and still. Had the librarian, Julia Bell, gone home for the day? Picking up her pace, she made her way toward the main office to look through the window—it was dim and quiet. Kim Stone, the school secretary, was not sitting at her desk tapping on her computer or fielding phone calls. Principal Britton’s office door hung open, as it always did when he was absent. 
The door to the empty office next to his was open as well—that door had always been closed. Everything appeared to be locked up tight for the night. Only, it wasn’t night—or at least she didn’t think it was so late. If it were night, where were the janitors? Why weren’t they dumping trashcans or mopping the hallways? Why wasn’t the school’s intercom system playing pop music as it always was while the janitors went through their evening tasks? Had she fallen asleep at her desk after she’d put her kindergartners on their buses for home? 
She must’ve slept for hours. She’d never done such a thing—sure, she’d been feeling a bit tired lately, but not weary enough to fall asleep at her desk while doing a little after school paperwork. Wow, she’d better get to bed early this night. 
She heard a noise. She stilled to listen again—it sounded like a growl. She didn’t move, and again, a grumbling growl echoed down the hallway. Trepidation ripped through her. She turned only to see a lion at the other end of the corridor! What? What would a lion be doing in the school? 
No time to wait for the answer—he let out a roar that rumbled the windows, then he leapt into action galloping straight at her! 
Letting out a shriek, Fiona darted down the hallway as fast as she could possibly move! Could she outrun a lion? Somehow, she doubted it! Sliding on the smooth linoleum, she made a quick right down the hall that led to her classroom, only the hallway stretched making her destination farther away. Her heavy breaths boomed inside her head as she dashed toward her room. She could hear the lion’s paws pounding on the floor—he was getting closer, and yet her room was farther and farther away! 
Totally out of breath, she finally arrived at the door of her classroom. She slid inside and slammed the door closed, twisting the lock. 
The lion snarled and roared and clawed at the door, pressing his face against the elongated glass window along the margin of the door. His dark eyes outlined with a thick band of black that extended toward his temples, such as Cleopatra’s. 
Trapped and terrified, Fiona screamed!
!!!

Sometimes people don't understand why they are sad, scared, edgy--they think everything is normal and that they can handle just about anything that comes along. But sometimes, that is not the case... You and I, and, as Fiona, discovered, get irritated, upset, and even talk about things that bother us during the day. But we don't admit that these things bother as much as they really do. And that's, sometimes, why we have nightmares...

Actually, the attempt to discover what is wrong via a crystal ball is fun but is unsuccessful. And, sometimes, you just have to finally face those fears, and realize that things were not so bad after all.. But wouldn't it be better to be able to think through issues as they are affecting you? McDonald, gives tweens, teens, and adults a chance to consider whether they can stop and explore what if anything is really bothering you. And, if you have a nightmare, think about what could have caused it...or talk to somebody about it, so that you may be able to better prepare for what comes to you each day...

A fun book, but it's also a teaching one--if you consider all that was going on and how Fiona's nightmares were visions in her mind of what she feared most during her days...  It would be interesting to see if your children understand what is actually being shared in the book... Check it out...I still suffer from flashback dreams once in awhile... When that happens, I always make a point of trying to figure out what caused me to dream those thoughts... If your children have scary dreams, this book can be a great way to talk about how what is happening in your life, affects what happens in your dreams at night!

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The windows were wide open to let the fresh air into the cabin or let the layers of dust escape from all the sweeping Peyton had been doing that morning. He’d been forced outside several times coughing and hacking. He strung rope from several trees to form a clothes line to dry the bedding he’d washed. He was beginning to think it would be far easier to go into Lost Pine and buy new sheets. 
All in all the cabin was starting to look presentable, but the sheets—not so much. As he stood back trying to decide, he noticed the bushes moving. He stilled, slowing his breathing, listening, while watching the tall thicket along the wood line. And there it was again—the wolf, slowly making his way along the trees. Interesting. Wolves are known to be nocturnal creatures. They sleep during the heat of the day, preferring to hunt at dusk. It was only one o’clock—what was the wolf doing out and about? 
Peyton inched his way amongst the sheets hanging on the line, hoping to get a better look from a concealed position. The wolf caught the movement and made haste across the field, disappearing into the trees on the other side. Peyton scrubbed his fingers across the stubble on his chin. This was his second sighting of the wolf—if it was the same wolf, and it looked to be. 
He didn’t have a chance to ask Clancy about the wolf yesterday when he’d arrived in Lost Pine. The main focus was Ben Lorde and his electro-sensitive followers who had taken up residence several miles away. Clancy was convinced that Lorde and his followers were responsible for his brother, Jed’s, death. Jed had gone on a lone fishing trip last year and never returned. His body was never found, and neither was any of his gear. Clancy felt he’d had some kind of altercation with the group and they’d killed him. He had no proof—only a strong gut feeling and the strange goings on among the community. Peyton had a ton of respect for his father’s old friend, Clancy, but he wasn’t sure his suspicions were justified. Anything can happen to a man alone in the Rockies—anything at all. 
Still, if he had an opportunity to check up on the community, he would. Right now, he wanted to check up on the wolf. Taking another look at the sheets and blankets, he decided it was time for new—he would take a drive into town to make the purchases and take the opportunity to ask Clancy about the wolf. Besides, it would give the dust a chance to settle inside the cabin. After washing up a bit, Peyton jumped into his Jeep, buckled up, and set off for town. 
The warm summer air whipped through the open cab blowing his T-shirt against his chiseled chest. He wasn’t more than a mile or so down the road when he came upon a two-seater blue Razor along the side of the road, stuck in a ditch. A tiny slender woman was standing near the vehicle looking rather agitated. She was dressed in a pair of jeans, a pair of sunglasses, and a long lab coat—not the usual attire one would see a person driving a Razor wearing. Razors are all-terrain vehicles that more resemble a pimped-out golf cart than an ATV. Some have two seats, and some have four, while many have short cargo areas behind the seats. 
Peyton’s visit to Lost Pine was becoming more interesting by the day, he couldn’t help thinking as he slowed the Jeep to a stop next to the woman. “What happened?” Peyton asked. 
“Some lunatic in a pickup truck ran me off the road!” the woman said. Her face was flushed with anger. The top button of her blue blouse had come undone revealing droplets of sweat glistening above her cleavage. “I was on my way into town to pick up some packages. He came at me like a bat out of hell. I had to swerve to get out of his way. What’s wrong with people?” 
Peyton jumped out of the Jeep to take a look at the Razor. “It doesn’t appear to be damaged, just stuck. I don’t have a chain with me and I’m not sure I’ve got one at my cabin. I was going into town myself. I’ll give you a ride. I’ll pick up a chain and I can pull you out of the ditch after we finish our business in town. If that’s good with you.” 
Rubbing the nape of her neck, she noticed her open blouse. Letting out a gasp, she quickly buttoned up. “That…that would be very kind of you…mister—” Peyton held out his hand. “I’m Peyton. And you are?” 
She took off her sunglasses to expose her fairy green eyes, then shook his hand. Obviously trying to shrug off the irritation of being forced into a ditch, she smiled brightly. “Naomi…Dr. Naomi Jenkins.”
“Nice to meet you, Dr. Naomi Jenkins, you must live around here if you’re a doctor and you’re driving around a Razor.” 
“I live in the electro-sensitive community. I’m the physician for the community. I have medical supplies waiting for me in town.” 
“Well, we’d best get going.” She hurried to the Razor and grabbed a medical bag sitting on the seat. “I can’t leave this behind. It’s got medication in it.” 
Peyton helped her into the passenger seat and then slid into the driver seat. 
“So you suffer from electro-magnetic-sensitivity?” 
“No, my son does. While we in the medical field don’t recognize EHS, what my son was going through was very real—constant headaches, vomiting, digestive irritation, that was just for starters. At first, I thought he didn’t want to go to school or perhaps his study load was too stressful, but no matter what we tried, his symptoms kept escalating. I didn’t figure it out until I took him on a camping trip with no devices—his symptoms disappeared almost immediately. At that point, I couldn’t deny what his prognosis was—EHS, Electromagnetic hypersensitivity. I’m surprised you know what it is—not many people do...”
~~~





Finding a book from which I learn something new is what I consider an added bonus. I learned all about Electromagnetic Hypersensitivity in one of the books I had missed from The First Force Series. Had you heard of it? Well, I've added a couple of the shorter videos to share, but there are many more that reveals that this is Fact...not Fiction. In sharing this information, as a teaching and warning for many of us, McDonald has done a great service since most of the victims of this syndrome are not aware of what is wrong with them...and many doctors also might not know...

In telling about this issue, McDonald brings together two lovers. One in First Force and one in private security. Peyton Mattock was home from Russia, where he works for Hawke International Security Firm.  He's planning to meet up with Casey Rhodes, a First Force Operative, to spend some quality time at his cabin. Peyton has gone in advance, to clean the cabin a little, gather supplies, and ensure everything is perfect for Casey's arrival.

Only to find some really strange things happening in the little town with the only supply store around. One of the first things he noticed was a telephone booth in front of the story. Ok, that probably means that cell phones would be a problem in some areas...

Actually, it meant that there was no longer any electronic equipment in the entire area! No cell phones, television, music, computers, wifi and more--a wave-free existence! Clancy McCade would know what was going on--he'd been there in town since long before they had their cabin and Clancy took care of checking things out in Peyton's absence.  What he learned was far more than expected... Especially, that Clancy's brother was dead and he was blaming his death on a new settlement that had been created, where no type of electronics were permitted--by government approval... A very rich individual had developed a community where individuals with the syndrome, including himself, could live without problems, at least until a cure was found...

But this particular rich man was, unfortunately, not totally interested in saving many lives--just his own! And that's when outside help from First Force was called in (figuratively!). This is not the usual thriller, however, since most of the community were there to ensure a family member was able to live regularly, along with family members who cared enough to enter into this wave-free environment. Did the occupants need help, or were they part of a conspiracy underlying all that was really happening there, without any way to reach out beyond the community? Because of the unusual storyline...I'll let you discover more in the book itself!

The entire First Force is a great group of characters that, in each book, has a spotlight case handled by one or more members. In this book, we also have a personal touchstone as one of the members is about to have a child... While, by the ending, the need for a new member is gratefully welcomed. I'm hoping this series continues. The direction of First Force is uniquely flexible to respond to those needing help or in danger. They are prepared, yes, but there is always a personal element to team members that includes a touch of love moving it into a delightful pairing of romance and suspense.

I loved the side story of a gray wolf that entered the story as a scavenger looking for food near Peyton's cabin...and how...and who...was able to befriend him!

This was my first introduction to Casey Rhodes--a very cool lady who I would like to see more of in the future! Hint to the author... The First Force Series are always recommended... I'm now caught up and looking for a new addition! In the meantime, the entire series is highly recommended.


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For 26 years Cindy's life whirled around a song and a dance--she was a professional choreographer. She taught ballet, jazz, and tap. During that time she choreographed many musicals and an opera for the Pittsburgh Savoyards. Most recently, she has retired to write her novels. She resides with her husband and Cocker Spaniel, Allister, on their Thoroughbred farm known as Fly By Night Stables near Pittsburgh. To learn more about all of Ms. McDonald's book series and to read excerpts from her upcoming books, please visit her website: www.cindymcwriter.com 
You can also find out about her cozy mystery series, Fiona Quinn Mysteries, and her children's books under her pen name, C.S. McDonald. Here's that website: www.csmcdonaldbooks.com Check it out!

Thursday, September 15, 2016

Cindy McDonald Takes Readers "To The Brink" with Her Latest First Force Series! Come Meet Amos!



She had noticed a lone Belted Galloway in a corral just beyond the barn. The other cows were in the distance. Wondering why that cow was isolated, she decided to get a closer look at the creature and at the wide white swath around its belly. So instead of following Dan, she made her way toward the corral.
The overly large cow lifted his head from the stack of hay that he'd been munching to watch her approach.
Boo barked.
Tess arrived at the corral. The cow walked toward her.
Boo growled and barked again, beating his front paws against the ground.
Tess stepped up on the first rung of the metal corral to get a closer look.
The cow started to trot toward her.
pic from their
picnic!

Tess stepped up on the second rung.
Suddenly, strong arms wrapped around her and pulled her from the fence., "Whoa, Amos!"
The cow came to a sliding halt. Tess found herself enveloped in Dan's arms.
"I'm sorry," he said. "I shoulda warned you that that's the bull. He can be very aggressive, as many bulls are--especially with breeding season coming up. Please stay away from this corral. I don't want you to get hurt."
She was up close and personal with Dan Garrison. Looking into his brown eyes filled with oncern, she thought that he was like her knight in shining armor. Okay, how hokey was that? But seriously, that's what it felt like...
...Yeah, Dan Garrison was looking a lot like her next big mistake, yet somehow she was feeling good about it all--astonishingly good...
~~~



To The Brink:
The First Force Series

By Cindy McDonald

OMG! The scene that takes readers "To The Brink" is unbelievable! But, then, there are many more exciting scenes to capture the attention of each and every reader! I myself read until after midnight, not being willing to put the book down before finished.

And it's been the same since the first book , the second, and the
 last one, In the Dark.  There are two fantastic things you can expect: a male-female pair that will immediately call you to attention... and a completely different story that will be totally unexpected, yet one of the most exciting books you will read! Do check out my reviews if you haven't read the first three books, or just want to refresh you memory of the earlier novels...





He flicked off the lights for the
staircase and turned the doorknob
and when he stepped onto the
main floor of the mansion, he was
take aback. His jaw tightened. The
cobwebs instantly cleared. Quickly
and agilely, he yanked the gun from
his waistband and trained it on a
beautiful blond woman standing
just beyond the door...
~~~
Emily Proctor
playing
Tess McMillan
This time, it's Dan Garrison, who is the spotlighted member of the First Force. He has been left helping to hold up the business while a number go on a short vacation. It should be an easy time for Dan, except that he discovers that he's allergic to cats, and caring for them is part of the job while everyone's away...With streaming eyes and sneezes Dan flees to the clinic in the basement to find something to help...and falls asleep... When he awakes, he finds her inside... inside a supposedly totally secure team headquarters... While holding a gun on her, she explains that she's looking for Grant Ketchem, who had offered to help her when she needed it. But that didn't calm Dan, as he asked her if he had told her how to breach the security system. At that point, Tess begins her counterplay, quickly honing in on his obvious allergy to cats and pointing out that they were right there making him more miserable... And soon they were both back down in the clinic--he had at least recognized her name and knew her background and was willing to talk...

  Tess McMillan had no doubt that there was a private corner in hell reserved for the likes of Ballard Crafton. As if she were a trapped animal, she crouched in a dark corner of the rented cabin. Damn him. She hoped that he was feeling the burn at that very moment.
She'd spent most of her adult life with Ballard. She'd been with him since she was seventeen. He'd been her mentor. He'd been her lover, and for the last five years of his life, she had been his wife. That's right, she had been his wife--but he hadn't necessarily been her husband...No, theirs had been an arrangement based on possession--on his need to possess, period. Ballard had insisted that she keep her maiden name and pose as his personal assistant so that the women whom he pursued with his good looks and alluring charm would be none the wiser to his marital status...
But Ballard was dead, and she had to deal with the problems that the man had left behind...
The vehicle drove slowly past the cabin. Stealthily, she slid to the other side of the window and pinched back the interim... She had to get out. It was time to find another place to hide...
After setting the safety, Tess laid the .45 on the bed. She twisted her long blond hair on top of her head...and scanned the area for the SUV...she scurried to the car, tossed the suitcase into the trunk, and jumped into the driver's seat. Slowly, so as to not attract any attention, she pulled away from the cabin to drive down the dark, secluded road that led out of the camp and to the main highway. So far, so good--there was no sign of the black SUV...
~~~

The criminal element in the book is all just waiting for you to hate...Tess's very rich husband was planning to become a multi-billionaire by creating a super-hero...not a new concept, but certainly a totally different surrounding story that moves toward a climax that is totally unexpected and surprising with the various players getting involved to eliminate the bad guys.. It may not seem believable, but then when criminals are also, well, crazy, you never know what their minds will dream up... Certainly McDonald has a sweet beautiful face so that you'd never believe she could conceive of the scenes found in this novel! LOL! I loved all of them!

And of course, McDonald is ensuring that each of The First Force Team finds someone to love...and Dan didn't take too long in doing that...

"Bra and panties? No. I usually do yoga in yoga pants and a sports bra, but I didn't pack any, and I didn't have anything on hand that would stretch or bend with my body, so I opted for this," she said as casually as if she were giving him directions into town. Then she lay on her back. The bear's wispy fur tickled the countours of her body. She grabbed her right leg and extended it toward the ceiling...
While pouring coffee into his mug, he noticed the hushed hum of music flowing through the downstairs. It was coming from his flat screen, and the volume was turned down very low. She'd put on some music channel that played that weird meditation-relaxation mumbo-jumbo.
It was hard to not watch her. He tried to busy himself in the kitchen by pouring half-and-half into his coffee, stirring it, drinking it, and watching her. The watching was simply beyond his control. He went to the cupboard to set a mug out for her in case she wanted some coffee after she was done.
Finally she sat in a post that he recognized as a yoga position--he saw on TV programs and in commercials all the time. She was sitting crosslegged with her head up, her eyes closed, and the backs of her hands resting on her knees. Her ponytail was gently lying over her shoulder, hovering between her round breasts, and moving up and down as she breathed.
Boo seemed every bit as rapt in the sight as he was...
!!!

Although I enjoyed sharing some of my favorite scenes, notice that they give very little away about the actual story. Still they give you an unique peek at the sexy, dangerous, with thrilling excitement of the hunt for a lone, beautiful, and talented woman who has also realized that she needs help...from First Force! What a series! And, wow, did I enjoy the book. 

McDonald's scene writing in this latest seemed extraordinarily thrilling... I'm sure glad I don't have to choose favorites, but rather, just look forward to the next one, where it's going to be Casey, the team's sharpshooter's, turn! Can't Wait! If you haven't started reading Cindy McDonald, you're missing watching a rising star in the thriller genre! Highly recommended.


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For 26 years Cindy's life whirled around a song and a dance--she was a professional choreographer. She taught ballet, jazz, and tap. During that time she choreographed many musicals and an opera for the Pittsburgh Savoyards. Most recently, she has retired to write her novels. She resides with her husband and Cocker Spaniel, Allister, on their Thoroughbred farm know as Fly By Night Stables near Pittsburgh. To learn more about all of Ms. McDonald's book series' and to read excerpts from her upcoming books, please visit her website: www.cindymcwriter.com
You can also find out about her cozy mystery series, Fiona Quinn Mysteries, and her children's books under her pen name, C.S. McDonald. Here's that website: www.csmcdonaldbooks.com Check it out!

Monday, January 18, 2016

Latest in The First Force Series, Into the Dark, by Cindy McDonald Creates Emotional Roller-coaster for Readers!

Walking hand in hand along the stony dirt road lined with thatched huts. Mauritia palms, large leafy foliage, and succulents Sierra counted to twenty in Spanish, "Dieciocho, diecinueve, viente!"
"Very good! What a smart girl you are?" she praised the child.
The road was busy with villagers, nodding at her and her daughter as they passed. Some called out greetings. Sierra was only too happy to reply in the villager's native tongue. They would smile at the child through the maize of dust that seemed to constantly cling in the thick air and cloying heat...
Sierra broke through her contemplation, "Mommy. Who are they?"
She turned toward the west end of the village to see a cloud of dust rising over the huts like a furious tornado coiling into the town. Engines revved, men were yelling in Spanish, but she'd couldn't understand their words, and that's when the shooting started...Sierra screamed.
She whipped Sierra into her arms and hurried into the busy, trying to find a way to safety...
She grabbed the handle of the thatched door, except she was yanked backward by her braid. Landing on her back, she lay in the dust, coughing, trying to catch a breath, trying to see through the miasma of grime, when her daughter was snatched from her arms by a tall man wearing a black scarf. He dragged her, kicking and screaming, up the short steps into the hut...
"Sierra!" Rayne shrieked into the dark. "Sierra! My God, Sierra!"
In frenzy, she jumped to her knees. With her fingers spread wide, Rayne swept her hands over the bed searching for her daughter when strong arms enveloped her. She couldn't breathe. She pulled, pushed and punched to escape the grip of the horrible man who killed her daughter and husband and took her hostage, Esteban Rojas.
Then a voice spoke softly to her, pressing his mouth into her saturated hair. "Shhh, easy now," he said, rocking her to and fro. "Shhh, it's okay, Rayne. It's okay, you're with me, Jack..."
~~~


Into the Dark:
The First Force Series

By Cindy McDonald

Whew, it's been awhile since a story has kept my emotions riding a roller coaster as this story took me--from flashback nightmares of  horrible past scenes, into sexy bedroom scenes, into adorable interaction with a special child, and on into heart-throbbing thrills as the action becomes dangerous. It's certainly not fast-paced reading because McDonald reigns control over what she throws her readers into! We might slow down to enjoy the romantic scenes as the two main characters openly begin to express their feelings for the other. Then, see the triggers begin which throws in flashbacks and emotional loss for both of those characters! I believe this is my favorite by Cindy McDonald!

Cindy has certainly become one of my favorite authors having been a spotlighted author for her Unbridled Series* (links shown below for the week she spent here as a guest blogger or via my reviews of her books). Then she began a new series, The First Force Series and blasted into the Thriller genre full-steam ahead. First was Crossfire, then To The Breaking Point. and Into the Dark is the third in this series. Do check out my reviews of the first two books and you will begin to get the flavor of the series characters. Especially Jack and
 
Lil, his daughter, who were main characters in a previous book and now join Dr. Rayne Lee, who is now spotlighted.

Remember Jane Seymour as Dr. Quinn? I thought of her to play Rayne because of her personality as well as credentials... Dr. Rayne Lee serves as the doctor for the First Force team. She is also a relative of the team leader and has made her residence in the mansion that serves the group...

Rayne joined the team after her husband and daughter were killed while they were in Peru, both serving as doctors to the local residents and beyond. Rayne was kept and remained for seven months to be the sex slave of the guerrilla leader that had destroyed their camp there until rescued by First Force. Now that past has raised ugly actions for Rayne!

Two different missions arrived for the team. While two men went to guard a potential candidate for government appointment, Rayne began to get telephone calls from a young girl who claimed to be Sierra...her daughter, thought to be dead.

Rayne and Jack were just now beginning to share their feelings about the other when the calls started. And once they'd shared them, things moved very fast!
Rayne leaned against the wall, crossing her arms under her breasts to admire his tight rear...she couldn't stop the desire that was driving the curl of her lips. She reached her hand out to him. Accepting her hand, he pulled her into his arms, kissing her neck, her right ear lobe, nibbling his way across her delicate jaw to her lips. Spellbound, she hopped up, wrapping her legs around his torso, pressing her tongue into his mouth, wanting nothing more than to be as close to this man as she could possibly get. In a silky voice, she whispered, "I want you, Jack. I want you now..."
"You have way too many clothes on, and I have way too little patience," he said in a husky tone...

~~~


Not only did they result in flashback nightmares for Rayne, they also resulted in Rayne being afraid to share them with Jack, because it sounded so crazy to claim her dead daughter was calling her. The first call was so short and was difficult to hear clearly; Rayne quickly assumed that it was a wrong number or maybe the girl's name had been Sarah rather than Sierra which was an unusual name. Slowly, however, Rayne continued to wait for calls, knowing that she would never be satisfied if she didn't follow through checking. Then, with quick thinking, she obtained a program to record on her phone and was able to present a full conversation in order to seek help from First Force.

There really was a little girl calling. She and her mother had been captured and held as prisoners and Patrizia was forced to work quickly to speak English without any accident. She knew that not only was she and her mother probably going to die, but that the calls she'd been making to Dr. Rayne Lee would probably cause the death of her as well! But no matter how she felt, there was really no choice--the men holding her captive threatened her and her mother continuously with death...

The characters created for this book are strongly defined and readily able to carry a series for a long time. I'm already match-making for two characters in this book to ultimately fall in love and it would really be a fun book to read! Cindy, I'm sending my idea telepathically as I write! LOL No matter what happens personally with the team members, readers will definitely know that this team is so fine-tuned that they are capable of handling missions like no other group in other books. They are unique, personally driven by their past and extremely well-trained and experienced in what they do. Kudos to McDonald... I love how she is handling and developing this series!




Sooooo, if you know the song being played above, you should be able to guess my hint of how this fantastic book ends! Really enjoyed this one and recommend it highly!


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For 26 years Cindy's life whirled around a song and a dance--she was a professional choreographer. She taught ballet, jazz, and tap. During that time she choreographed many musicals and an opera for the Pittsburgh Savoyards. Most recently, she has retired to write her novels. She resides with her husband and Cocker Spaniel, Allister on their Thoroughbred farm know as Fly By Night Stables near Pittsburgh. To learn more about her book series' and to read excerpts from her upcoming books, please visit her website: www.cindymcwriter.com