Showing posts with label Tower Lowe. Show all posts
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Wednesday, February 22, 2017

Characters Win Over This Reader in In Albuquerque, Abandoned!

In Gallup, Cinnamon and Burro had traced Momma through an old roommate named Mirage. And Mirage reported that Momma had moved to Albuquerque. “Look, if she moved to Albuquerque, why not? Magan only recently moved out of Southern Ridge, a group of low-end apartments in SE Albuquerque. We think your mother was low on money when she left Gallup, so it makes sense.” “Have you got Magan’s phone number?” “Of course – and his address. He said it was fine to visit. He’s intrigued.” “I’ll look into it this week.” Cinnamon finished the last of the pastry. “Burro and I Cinnamon finished the last of the pastry. “Burro and I have a new case in Albuquerque.” “Burro told me about it – a disturbed man named León who looks for a baby in a dumpster. Pretty odd.” Alice said. “Burro will get one of his visions, and we’ll start there.” Cinnamon’s partner had treatable schizophrenia. The solutions to their cases were based on the clues he noticed in his visions. Alice offered a small hug and left the Counterculture patio. Cinnamon stayed behind, ordered another coffee, and watched the black and brown dogs, who remained with their owners, sleeping under the table, completely trusting that they would be cared for and loved each and every day.
~~~

León was about six feet tall, wore a denim vest and a yellow oxford shirt, and stood in the center of the dumpster with his hands in the air. A police car was parked across the street, lights blazing, and an officer stood by the open door. It was the first Monday in October, and the Albuquerque Balloon Fiesta was in full swing. Colored globes, launched against a crisp, blue sky, surged over the man’s head, A blue and yellow balloon sank low into the neighborhood, breathing hot gas like an asthmatic troll.
“Baby in the dumpster!” shouted the man. Cinnamon watched Burro creep around a tree near the trash container to try to get a better look. Red and blue flashing lights made a pattern on his cheeks and in his blond braid. 
A local teacher, 5’ 2” with a discrete mustache, stood next to her on the sidewalk. “This happens every day,” Martin Trujillo said. All three were focused on the man in the dumpster. Martin had brought Cinnamon and Burro here to investigate the incident. “First,” Martin continued, “León Baca climbs inside the trash bin and begins to search through the rubbish. Next, Officer Chip Anderson shows up in the police car with the lights going and starts screaming at León. 
My students see this every morning out the window of our math classroom. It drives me crazy.” 
“How does it end?” Cinnamon asked. 
“Watch,” he said. “Get the hell out of there,” Anderson yelled. From the street, a man in a gray sweatshirt and woman in electric blue spike heels entered the scene. “Leave him alone,” the man yelled at Anderson. 
“That’s Booth Baca,” Mr. Trujillo said. “He’s León’s brother. The woman is Angela, Booth’s wife.” “León, honey,” Angela tottered slowly towards the dumpster. “There’s no baby there. You’re okay.” “There’s a baby in here.” 
Anderson drew his weapon. “Get out of the dumpster, León.” 
“You stupid idiot,” Booth called out at the cop. “Let us take care of this. He doesn’t understand.” 
“He needs to stop this. There’s no baby.” The officer’s arms tightened at the elbows. 
“He doesn’t have the right to shoot him, does he?” Cinnamon asked. 
“No,” Trujillo answered. “But one day he might do it anyway. He draws the gun every morning, and if the principal of my school knew, we’d have a lockdown at 9: 00 am every day.” 
León moved side to side and started to moan. “Come on, honey,” Angela said. Booth moved closer to the policeman. 
“Put your gun away, dimwit.” “Okay, León, come on now. Get out.” 
Angela spoke in a low voice. 
“León is mentally ill,” Trujillo told Cinnamon and Burro. “He hears a baby in this dumpster every night.” León swayed for at least another minute, but he was moving towards the edge of the dumpster now, squatting low. Booth moved closer to Anderson and the cop car as if to redirect the cop’s attention away from León.
 “Angela has him now,” Booth said to Officer Anderson. “León will leave.” 
Anderson glanced at the trash container where León was stepping out with Angela’s assistance. He lowered his gun and returned it to the holster. “You need to take care of this guy. There’s no baby in the dumpster. The neighbors complain.” 
“Screw the neighbors.” 
“Easy for you to say, Booth. Half of them think he’s a nuisance, and the other half think there really is a baby...
~~~

Rainy Blue shot back. “But, I do want to catch the Special Shapes Glodeo in the evening. They light up all the balloons on the ground at dusk, as I’m sure you know. It happens Wednesday. You want to go?” 
“I’d go anywhere with you.” He looked at her with glazed over blue eyes, and she saw the beads in her earrings reflected in his eyes. “You’re beautiful,” he said. (Burro has found a friend!)
~~~


In Albuquerque, Abandoned

By Tower Lowe


Arrived in Albuquerque! Guess what, I immediately met a couple of old friends I was happy to see. Cinnamon and Burro, who I had met earlier in the book, In Gallup, Greed! That review got over 700 hits, so I'm hoping this one goes higher... Yes, I still don't know much about Cinnamon and Burro, and, yes, Cinnamon is still hunting for her mother...but I also went ahead and got the mystery sample that was offered by the author. In other words, by the second book, spending time with these two characters, I was hooked!

Cinnamon and Burro are a wonderful team... Because their jobs in relation to schools in the area, takes them all over, the two can easily merge in the tracking of Cinnamon's mother as they "go to work..." 

And, somehow, they always get hired for additional jobs that lead to a mystery... Cinnamon is driven, and believes she actually saw her mother in this book...as she was leaving...so we already know where they are headed next!

But the mystery in Albuquerque is really cool, and certainly character driven...The characters have become the overall series triumph in my opinion.  Once readers become personally involved with the characters, you want to read more...

You see, I think, the characters created by Tower Lowe remind us of people we know...maybe even ourselves...or they are people that have been affected by today's culture, such as using drugs, and readers watch to see how each individual deals with their particular quirks. Cinnamon is obviously obsessive, but also a caring and inquisitive individual who also becomes driven to find out what is happening and solve the latest mystery that comes along... Burro, on the other hand, has been diagnosed schizophrenic, but that has also given him some paranormal gifts that result in visions regarding his surroundings. 

In this story, there is also another schizophrenic man who Burro personally takes under his wing, trying to help him via their mutual issues...

Burro turned to Cinnamon
and Mr. Trujillo.
“There is a baby,” he said.
~~~
Leon was good in high school, and heavy into sports, so very popular; that is, until he developed schizophrenia. Now, he lives with his brother and his wife, who has been delegated to be nurse for Leon--and greatly resents it...

Cinnamon and Burro come into the picture because Leon has been hearing a baby cry every night...and linking it with a newspaper clipping of two boys actually finding a baby in a dumpster in another city... In his mind he'd developed the theory that this baby he was hearing was in a nearby dumpster...and every morning he would go directly there, get in and try to find the baby... agitated and unable to think rationally about the baby never being there, no matter how many times he searches...

It was disturbing to the class in the nearby school, and the teacher, who had known Leon, hired Cinnamon and Burro to help...hopefully to find the baby he was hearing, or to prove to Leon that there was no baby...

While the dumpster dips continue daily, a local cop has come to be there every morning and starts to hassle Leon, oftentimes pulling his gun and causing more trouble than he's helping... Yeah, meet Chip...he has some issues...

Then there is Booth, Leon's brother, who has gotten into some criminal activities, while Angela is having an affair...all this surrounds Leon, but nobody considers that Leon is intelligent and, most times, he realizes there is no baby, and he hears things that are happening all around him...

Then Booth is killed...and Leon disappears...

There are many more people involved in the various story lines running through the book and so many angles that increases the complexity of the mystery, or should I say mysteries, that are also running concurrently... But, the real kicker was in the climatic ending, which, I guarantee, will be a total shock to all readers! (Let me know if you guessed it!)

The merge of various cultural norms is prevalent in the book and especially adds to the intrigue since there are obviously differences that are not necessarily known before you read
about them. I was enthralled enough to easily ignore that it will take the entire series to maybe find Cinnamon's Mom...but, in the meantime, readers will be heading to Taos next!

Highly recommended! I think you'll love unique the characters as much as I do!


GABixlerReviews


Tower Lowe (aka Donna Tower Pecherer) is published in Alfred Hitchcock Mystery Magazine and is the author of mystery novellas and full-length novels featuring Cinnamon and Burro. Her new series of historical mysteries features Cotton Lee Penn and Max Mayfair. She lives in New Mexico and grew up in Homeville, Virginia. 

Contact her at towerlowe.com


Monday, July 11, 2016

Tower Lowe Presents In Gallup, GREED--A Mystery Novel...Which Coulda Been Much Better...




Greed is the second book in a series which begins in In Dulce, Disturbed....

In the back of Greed, the author graciously includes a Note about the desire for comments to help potential readers... Then she adds that the book begins with a series of novellas which have been collected into the first book. Then she adds "There you will find out how Cinnamon and Burro got started and discover the clues to Momma that led up to this book."

My problem was that this final comment did not help me, the reader of the second book in any way... You see, all through the book I had been looking for information about who Cinnamon and Burro are... That is, there are no flashbacks or character development of the main characters in the second book. Duhhh... This is not the first author who has committed this "sin in my book" but to actually acknowledge that she was aware that she didn't include "something" in her second book and referred us, instead, back to the first book,indicated to me that she had not thought about the need to have each book readable as a free-standing novel. This, well, crossed her off for me to become a potential fan of a series that appears to be one that could become popular. Sooo, my warning is that if the book sounds interesting, be sure to start with the first book if you are a character-driven reader, or you will experience the same frustration I did... Other than that very important factor, Greed is a unique and good book that had the potential to be great...






In Gallup, GREED


By Tower Lowe
My phone played an electronic version of The Magic Flute," but the bed sheets were crumpled and thrown about with such force, it took me until the last moment to pick up the phone and answer. I slipped out of the sheets and walked around the corner, glancing back at the vision of Jake sprawled on my bed.


I can see it, Cinnamon," Jake said.
"Where is it? Under the bed?"
Mesh curtains, beige-pink, fell against the Santa Fe casita's adobe walls, and dropped lightly across the edge of the bed where Jake lay on his side, a white cotton sheet over his narrow hips, his chest glowing in the deep afternoon light. We were drinking Chai, Jake's favorite. It made the room smell of cinnamon, like Momma. I was happy in that room, lying on the bed with Jake. He sucked the aimlessness right out of me, and his masculine figure in the dim light reminded me of hope, a lost feeling from my childhood. I answered my mobile.
"What's up?" It was Burro. A Sunday call from my assistant meant an urgent matter.
"Hey, Cinnamon--Alice called me. She says we need to take off for Gallup immediately. There's been a murder." Alice is my newfound connection to Momma.
"At that middle school we're going to next week?"
"No, not the middle school. This is about Alice's Native American friend, Mirage. The one who roomed with Momma in Gallup? She things she killed her brother last night..."
~~~




The room oozed money and
shame...
Brains oozed up out of the center
of a large iron frying pan and
began to scramble on the stovetop.
Burro sensed confusion, damage,
a lack of understanding, missing
pieces of information--it was hard
to express what he felt when he
saw the brains oozing and frying
in the money-filled kitchen and
dining area. The floors started
to tilt.
"I sense confusion," Burrow
spoke tightly into the phone.
"You have a vision?"
"It's forming now."
Okay. That's good, I think.
Mirage wants to hire you and
Cinnamon as priviate
investigators to find out if
she killed Lonnie. Or who
killed Lonnie. Like that."
~~~
Cinnamon and Burro travel to various state schools to ensure that the needs of children who are challenged are given opportunity to attend regular school classes. To this basic job has been added becoming private investigators, apparently because they have been brought into murder investigations on their previous trips to schools. And more money would help, of course...

Cinnamon and her father was abandoned by her mother when she was six. She found letters from her mother after her grandmother died and has been hunting for her ever since... or at least find out what happened to her... One other thing we know is that Burro has visions...


I especially appreciated the several children with whom Cinnamon and Burro worked. This minor sub-plot lends an important social topic that, in my opinion, added greatly to the overall book.


The murder that had been committed was sad for me...His own sister, having been out on drugs and/or booze, had no clue whether she had, perhaps, killed her brother during her period of being "out..." For me the thought of being so out of control of your actions that you do not remember anything has always kept me from even considering drugs, or even drinking to a great extent.



While she was waiting for the investigators, Mirage forced herself to go over to Redemption. Redemption is a neat idea--a gallery that would be used to share and showcase the various native artists in the area who would, normally, have a hard time gaining recognition for their work. Lonnie, Mirage's brother, had been one of the artists.


The author has also brought in the spirituality and importance of The Spirit guidance of the artists and describes how some of their work actually lends an other-worldly feeling when coming into the gallery... As the investigation goes on, that aspect becomes a major problem that may have led to...murder...





Inside the door, up high, I noticed a ten foot oil paining, a graying Native man, looking up and off to the east, an expression of plenty filling his face...
"Let's go where he's looking," I smiled upward as Mirage greeted us from the lobby.
"That's Nez's work," she commented. "He calls him The Redeemer--a kind of spirit guide for the gallery. We get offers all the time for that painting, but Nez won't sell. He says The Redeemer watches over the gallery and the artists." The looked away from the bronze face. "Didn't do Lonnie much good."
"Redemption must have been Lonnie's dream come true," I murmured.
"Not really." She shook her head. "Redemption was Jerry's dream that he sold to Lonnie."
..."Nez does the oils. He prefers thick lines and ridges and geometric shapes combined with realism. His works sell for $150,000 - $200,000. The artist gets 30% of the sale."
"What?" Burro was shocked...
~~~

Another side-plot that is intriguing is that one of the local residents is the daughter of an archaeologist, who happened to be the former lover of Cinnamon's mother. This has little to do with the murder mystery, but does move the story forward, I believe, related to Cinnamon's research to find her mother.


"R-e-s-p-e-c-t. Find out what it means to me."
Aretha Franklin?
Alice opened the door to Mirage's apartment.
Mirage stood washing dishes and swinging her hips, singing soul music. Alice laughed, and Mirage turned around.
"Haven't seen you this happy since college," Alice called out. "And I've never seen you this happy washing dishes."
Mirage walked over, turned the music down. "I know. It's wrong, with Lonnie gone. But I figured out how I can bring him back, in a way, by respecting his memory and changing my life..."
~~~

There really is much to offer in this book and I've tried to highlight some of that... Check out other reviews as well, especially if you enjoy a book which doesn't have an emphasis on the characters, but rather on solving a murder mystery... For me, character development is key, especially for a series where knowing about the characters is an important part of the progressing storyline. This book left me with a satisfied conclusion to the murder mystery but so many questions about the characters...For instance, are they Native American? How and why did the two characters get interested in helping special kids?  Anyway... like I said, start with the first book if you want to read Tower Lowe's second book, Greed... But, really,I believe it is the author's responsibility to make sure that isn't required...


GABixlerReviews



Tower Lowe (aka Donna Tower Pecherer) is published in Alfred Hitchcock Mystery Magazine and is the author of mystery novellas and a full-length novel featuring Cinnamon and Burro. She lives in New Mexico. The search for Momma in this series reflects the author's real life story because her own mother died when she was 13, and so she "searched" for her mother most of her life. Tower Lowe was a real person and Donna Tower Pecherer was named for her. Tower suffered from epilepsy, and died as a result of burns suffered during an epileptic seizure. All the stories include individuals with disabilities, including Burro, who partners with Cinnamon to solve crimes.

Contact me at towerlowe.com


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