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She tried to put herself in the shooter’s head, figure out what he was thinking. Two cops. Both with guns they hadn’t used. One was on the floor. The other hadn’t moved, hadn’t shot back, hadn’t screamed or jumped out the window or charged him.
I had a pleasant surprise when I picked up this book by Karen Slaughter, one of the best authors that is now writing! And when I learned that she was also behind the Will Trent TV program, I understood... You see, I've been watching this program, I think, since it came on television. But I had noticed just how much more complex and involved they were becoming. Seriously, quite a difference. I didn't take the time to do the research as to when Slaughter became involved, but I will say that the last shows of one of my routinely watched cop programs were much better than I'd remember there being... Whether or not Slaughter was a contributor to that improvement is really not relevant--it's enough to report that Will Trent has certainly improved as time has gone on... I'm loving it! The characters are outstanding and the closeness of the individuals in this particular group of officers is a wonderful contrast to the reality we see as we watch ICE work to destroy our neighborhoods... Especially since the cast is a pleasant group of multi-racial individuals who reveal no biases or prejudices against others in the show... It's a relief to watch the normal lives of all citizens as they play roles on normal entertainment events...
THURSDAY - ATLANTA, GEORGIA
Hospital elevators were notoriously unreliable, but Dr. Sara Linton felt that the ones at Atlanta’s Grady Memorial were particularly creaky. Still, like a gambling addict hitting a slot machine, she punched the button every time on the off chance that the doors would open. “Come on,” Sara mumbled, staring at the numbers above the doors, willing them to hit seven. She waited, hands tucked into the pockets of her white lab coat as the digital display showed ten, then nine, then stayed at a solid eight. Sara tapped her foot. She looked at her watch. And then she felt her body fill with dread as she saw Oliver Gittings trotting toward her. As a pediatric attending in Grady Hospital’s emergency room, Sara was in charge of several students who—despite some evidence to the contrary—assumed that one day they would become doctors. Night shifts were particularly tedious. There was something about the moon that turned their little brains into mush. Sara often wondered how some of them managed to dress themselves, let alone get into medical school. Oliver Gittings was one of the better examples. Or worse, as the case tended to be. In the last eight hours, he’d already spilled a urine sample on himself and accidentally sewn a sterile cloth onto the sleeve of his lab coat. At least she hoped it was accidental. He called, “Dr. Linton—” “This way,” Sara told him, giving up on the elevator and heading toward the stairs. “I’m glad I found you.” Oliver ran after her like an eager puppy. “An interesting case came up.” Oliver thought all of his cases were interesting. She said, “Give me the highlights.” “Six-year-old girl,” he began, pulling on the exit door twice before realizing that it opened outward. “Mom says the girl woke her up in the middle of the night for some water. They’re going down the stairs. The girl starts to fall. Mom grabs her arm. Something pops. The girl starts screaming. Mom rushes her here.” Sara took the lead down the stairs. She guessed, “X-ray showed a spiral fracture?” “Yes. The girl had a bruise on her arm here—” Sara glanced back to see where he indicated. “So, you suspect abuse. Did you order a skeletal survey?”
“Yes, but radiology is backed up. My shift is almost over. I thought I’d go ahead and call D-FACS to get things moving.” Sara abruptly stopped her descent. The Division of Family and Children’s Services. She asked, “You want to go ahead and put the kid in the system?” Oliver shrugged, as if this was nothing. “The girl’s too quiet. Mom’s antsy, irritated. All she wants to know is when they can leave.” “How long have they been here?” “I dunno. I think she was triaged around one.” Sara looked at her watch. “It’s 5:58 in the morning. They’ve been here all night. I’d want to leave, too. What else?” For the first time, Oliver seemed to doubt himself. “Well, the fracture—” Sara continued down the stairs. “No specific fracture is pathognomonic to child abuse. You call D-FACS and it’s a legal matter. If this mother is an abuser, you want to make sure she doesn’t get away with it. You need corroborating evidence. Does the girl seem scared of her mother? Does she look you in the eye and answer questions? Are there other bruises? Developmental delays? Continence issues? Is there a history of ER visits? How did she present otherwise?” Oliver didn’t immediately answer. Sara prompted, “Is she healthy? Well nourished?” “Yes, but—” “Stop.” Sara wasn’t looking for a discussion. She checked her watch again. “Dr. Connor is taking over for me, but you’ve got all of my numbers. Order the skeletal survey to see if there are any past breaks or fractures. Notify security to keep an eye on the mom. Call the other ERs to see if the girl’s ever been admitted.” Sara moderated her tone, trying to make it clear she was teaching him something, not punishing him. “Oliver, sixty-five percent of child abuse cases are flagged in emergency rooms. If you stay in pediatrics, this is the sort of thing you’re going to be dealing with on a weekly basis. I’m not saying you’re wrong. I’m just saying you need to know all the facts before you turn this girl’s life upside down. And her mother’s.”
“Yes, ma’am.” He headed down the stairs, hands tucked deep into his coat pockets. Sara didn’t immediately follow, cognizant that Oliver’s ego was fragile enough without her snapping at his heels. Instead, she sat on the bottom stair and checked her hospital BlackBerry. Sara’s eyes threatened to roll back in her head as she scrolled through the administrative detritus littering her mailbox. Meetings, conferences, denied requisitions, and new procedures for requisitioning, attending conferences, and scheduling meetings. She felt around in her other pocket and traded the BlackBerry for her personal phone. This was much better. Her father had emailed a silly joke about snails that he’d heard at the Waffle House. Her mother had forwarded a recipe that was never going to happen. There was a long email from her sister with a picture of Sara’s niece attached. She marked this unread and saved it for later. The next message was a text from Sara’s boyfriend. An hour ago, he’d sent her a photo of his breakfast: six mini chocolate doughnuts, an egg and cheese biscuit, and a large Coke. Sara didn’t know which one of them was going to have a heart attack first. The door popped open. Dr. Felix Connor stuck his head into the stairwell. He eyed Sara suspiciously. “Why do you look so happy?” “Because I can go home now that you’re finally here?” “Gimme a minute to hit the can.” Sara dropped the phone back into her pocket as she stood. Oliver wasn’t the only one who wanted to get out of here. Sara had pulled several night shifts in a row courtesy of a stomach flu that was running rampant through the hospital. She was beginning to feel punished for her own good health. Home. Sleep. Silence. She was already making plans as she walked through the ER. Thanks to her crazy work schedule, Sara had four full days of freedom ahead of her. She could read a book. Take a run with her dogs. Remind her boyfriend why they were together. This last bit widened her smile considerably. She got some curious looks in return. Not many people were happy to find themselves at Grady, which was the only publicly funded hospital left in Atlanta. The staff tended to take on the hardened demeanor of combat veterans. If practicing medicine was an uphill battle, working at Grady was on par with Guadalcanal. Stabbings, beatings, poisonings, rapes, shootings, murders, drug overdoses. And that was just pediatrics. Sara stopped at the computer by the nurses’ station. She pulled up Oliver’s patient on the monitor. The X-ray clearly showed where the child’s right humerus had been twisted. Either the mom was being truthful about what had happened on the stairs or she was savvy enough to fabricate a believable lie. Sara looked up, scanning the open-curtain area, which was predictably filled with repeat customers. Several drunks were sleeping off benders. There was a junkie who threatened to kill himself every time he got arrested and an older homeless woman who belonged in a mental hospital but knew how to game the system so she could stay on the streets. Oliver’s little girl was curled up asleep on the last gurney. Her mother was in a chair beside her. She was sleeping, too, but her hand was laced through her daughter’s. She hadn’t yet noticed the security guard standing a few feet away. Not for the first time, Sara wished that nature had devised a system to alert the rest of the world to people who were abusing children. A scarlet letter. A mark of the beast. Some sign that let decent people know these monsters couldn’t be trusted. Up until a few years ago, Sara had lived in a small town four hours south of Atlanta. She’d done double duty as the county’s pediatrician and medical examiner. Her father liked to joke that between Sara’s two jobs, she got them coming and going. While this was certainly true, too many times, Sara had been put in the position of witnessing firsthand the awful things people could do to children. The X-rays that showed repeatedly broken bones. The dental records revealing teeth that had rotted from neglect. The skin that was forever marked from burns and beatings. Now that she was living in Atlanta, Sara had the additional knowledge that came from dating a man who’d grown up in state care. Sara’s boyfriend didn’t like to talk about his childhood. When she touched her fingers to the healed cigarette burns on his chest, or kissed the jagged scar on his upper lip where the skin had been punched in two, she could only imagine the hell he’d survived. Still, there were far worse things that could happen to a child. The system was flawed in many ways, but it was also there for a reason. “I wish you’d stop smiling.” Felix Connor dried his hands with a paper towel as he walked toward Sara. “I gotta say, I’m still having a hard time shaking this flu.” Sara made her voice chipper. “Better sick at work than sick at home.” “Is that what you tell your patients?” “Just the babies.” Before Felix could come up with an excuse to leave, Sara started running down her cases. She was wrapping up the details on Oliver’s patient when she felt a rush of heat come to the back of her neck. Sara glanced over her shoulder, feeling like she was being watched. She did a double take when she saw her boyfriend. Will Trent was leaning against the wall. He was dressed in a charcoal three-piece suit that was nicely tailored to his lean body. His hands were in his pockets. His sandy-blond hair was damp, curving against the nape of his neck and stopping just shy of his collar. He smiled at her. Sara smiled back, feeling a familiar tingling in her chest. She had known Will for almost two years—met him in this very hospital—but lately their relationship had turned into something more. The depth of her feeling was an unexpected treasure. Sara had lost her husband five years ago. She had assumed she would spend the rest of her life alone. And then she’d met Will. Sara said, “Felix, I—” She glanced around, but he was gone. Will pushed away from the wall and walked toward her. “You look nice.” Sara laughed at the blatant lie. “What are you doing here? I thought you were working.” “My briefing’s not for another hour.” “Do you have time for second breakfast?” Will slowly shook his head. “Oh.” Sara realized he hadn’t just dropped by. She asked, “What’s wrong?”
“Maybe we could go somewhere?” She led him toward the doctors’ lounge. The door was about thirty feet away, giving Sara just enough time to work up a full-on worry. Will was a special agent with the Georgia Bureau of Investigation. He’d been working undercover for the last ten days. He couldn’t—or wouldn’t—tell Sara the details of his assignment, but he kept calling from strange numbers and showing up at odd hours. She had no idea where he came from or where he was going, and anytime she asked, he either changed the subject or found a reason to leave. When Sara wasn’t busy feeling mildly annoyed by all this, she was consumed with fear that something bad was going to happen. Or had already happened. Sara’s late husband had been a cop. He was murdered in the line of duty, and losing him had almost killed her. The thought of the same thing happening to Will was too much to bear. “Let me get that.” Will reached in front of Sara to open the door. Fortunately, the lounge was empty. He waited for her to sit down at the table before taking the chair across from her. She repeated, “What’s wrong?” Silently, he took her hand. Sara watched as Will ran his fingers along her palm, traced the inside of her wrist. Will watched, too, his deep blue eyes tracking the movement of his fingers. There was something about the way he watched himself touching her that made Sara’s skin start to tingle. She stilled his hand. All she needed was for one of her students to walk in and find her purring like a cat. Besides, she recognized Will’s stalling tactics by now. She leaned forward. “What is it?” He gave a half-smile. “Diversion not working?” “Almost,” she admitted.
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The GBI was equivalent to the FBI on the Federal Level. But in this book, Will Trent was undercover. Will was also involved with a woman and, it was a closer relationship than on tv. I enjoyed the longevity and closeness of this main character, who, once you know his back story, you will find that he is one of the most unique that you will find within a law enforcement agency. If you haven't yet seen any of the tv series, I highly recommend! For the first time for me, I'm tending to prefer the tv series as opposed to the book. It's probably because I've become invested in the lives of those in the tv series, which includes all of the agents in his area... But the importance of the topic covered in Unseen is one that calls for details of the reality...
The investigation was broad, but had becomes somewhat pinpointed on the fact that those involved were not afraid to go after the cops as well. At the same time, One of the officers who had a bad reputation with some people, was in trouble again... She had been partnered with a police officer who was killed during a shootout. That had been years ago, but, now, she was married to a relative of the wife of her former partner. And he'd been shot during a new criminal action... Was she bad luck, or was it just what the job was all about? Talk was spreading across GBI and relatives of agents...
And Will was at the scene, undercover when a raid went down... But more was yet to come!
MACON, GEORGIA
SEVEN DAYS AGO—THE DAY OF THE RAID Dawn turned the morning light a cobalt blue as the raid van roared down a gravel road. There were ten cops in back, five on one side, five on the other, all jammed shoulder-to-shoulder so that every bump of the tires made them jerk in unison. The radio speakers were blaring Ice-T’s “Cop Killer.” The air inside the van vibrated with the raging beat. Cop killer. Better you than me. Lena Adams steadied her shotgun as they hit another rut in the road. She checked the Glock strapped to her thigh, made sure the Velcro held the gun tightly in place. The voice in her head screamed along with Ice-T’s as they got closer to the target. She took a few quick breaths, not to clear her mind but to make it spin, to amp up the adrenaline and the absolute high that came from knowing she was a few moments away from the biggest bust of her career. And then everything stopped. The music snapped off. The red light came on over their heads. Silence. Two minutes until arrival. The van slowed. Gravel crunched under the tires. Guns were drawn, magazines checked. Helmets and protective glasses were adjusted. The smell of testosterone got thicker. Nine men and one woman. All of them suited in Kevlar vests and black fatigues, loaded up with enough ammo to take down a small army. Lena breathed through her mouth, tasting the fear and excitement circling inside the van. She took in her team. Eyes wide. Pupils the size of dimes. The anticipation was almost sexual. She could feel the exhilaration building around her, the way everyone shifted in their seats, gripped their guns tighter in their hands. They’d been staking out the house for the last two weeks, had planned their attack even as the junkies and whores streamed in and out like ants on a mound. There would be piles of money. Percocet. Vicodin. Hillbilly heroin. Coke. Guns. Lots of guns. Overnight surveillance told them that four men were inside the house. One was a low-level thug on parole off assault charges. The second was a junkie scumbag who would suck off a dog to feed his Oxy habit. The third was Diego Nuñez, an old-school enforcer who enjoyed getting his hands dirty. The fourth was their leader, a bastard named Sid Waller who’d been questioned on a rape and two different murders but somehow managed to skate on all of them. Waller was their main target. Lena had been tracking him for eight months, doing a masochistic hokeypokey—locking him up, letting him go, locking him up, letting him go. Not this time. The drugs and guns would put Sid away for twenty years, minimum, but Lena wanted more than that. She wanted him to know for the rest of his miserable life that a woman had cuffed him, jailed him, convicted him. Not that he would have a long life once Lena was finished. She wanted Sid Waller on death row. She wanted to watch them jam the needle in his arm. See that last flicker of life drain out of him. And she was betting her career on making that happen. For two weeks, she’d been fighting the brass, pushing them to keep the operation going, pleading with them to extend the overtime, authorize the manpower, spend the money, and pull in the favors for the snitch who’d brought them all to this house in the middle of the woods. Sid’s crew wouldn’t last long behind bars. Diego Nuñez would hold out, but the other two were junkies, and with Sid Waller out of the way, getting high would trump being loyal. In less than twenty-four hours, they’d both be scrambling to make deals, and Lena had a DA who was ready to hand them out. Sid Waller had killed a nineteen-year-old kid. He’d raped his own niece and slit his sister’s throat when she’d called 911. Every cop in this van wanted to be the one to take him down. Lena didn’t bother with wanting it. She was actually going to do it. She looked up at the ceiling, staring at the red light until it flickered off and then on again. One minute. Lena closed her eyes, going over the plan. They had pulled the records on the house. It was a foreclosure, one of many on the outskirts of town. Brick, which was good because it would stop bullets. The single-story structure was in the middle of two point-five acres bordered by a national forest on one side and a rural route on the other that bisected Macon and fed into Interstate 75, heading north into Atlanta. Searching the tax commissioner’s office had netted them a builder’s diagram: den, bathroom, and two bedrooms in the back. Dining room and kitchen in the front, with a set of stairs opposite the sink that led down into the basement. They’d rehearsed the raid so many times that Lena saw it like a tightly choreographed dance. DeShawn Franklin and Mitch Cabello would breach the side door with a Monoshock Ram. Lena would take the front of the house with Paul Vickery, her partner for the last year. Eric Haigh and Keith McVale would clear the bathroom and two bedrooms in the back. DeShawn and Mitch would secure any prisoners. The remaining men would guard the perimeter of the house and make sure no one slipped out through a window or door. Lena had wanted at least eight more bodies on the team, but the operation was already pushing the million-dollar mark and Lena knew better than to ask the brass for more. They always worked in twos; no one entered a room alone. The layout of the house was choppy, each room walled off with nothing but a door in and out. Back at the station, they’d taped off the garage, mapping the rooms to scale. Lena and Paul had two doorways to contend with before they reached the basement: den to dining room, dining room to kitchen. Each opening represented a new opportunity to get shot. The basement was going to be the trickiest part. The builder’s diagram showed a wide-open space, but that had been drawn in the fifties, when the house was built. Sometime in the last sixty years, the basement had been finished. There would be walls they didn’t know about. Closed doors and closets. There was no door to the outside, only two narrow, boarded-up windows that a grown man couldn’t fit through. The basement was a deathtrap. Back at the station, they had drawn straws to see who would go down first. Lena’s team had won, but that was only because she had been holding the straws. The van downshifted to a crawl. There were no windows in the back, but Lena could see past the driver’s head. The sun winked underneath the visor. A thick stand of pine trees arced around the side of the house. Aerial photos showed a straight shot to the rural route less than two hundred yards through the forest. If the bad guys decided to run, that was the direction they’d take, which was why two cruisers were assigned to patrolling that stretch of road. The van stopped. Overhead, the red light flickered again, this time staying off. Lena pumped her shotgun, loading a cartridge into the chamber. She checked the Glock again. Her team followed suit, checking their weapons. The driver, an old-timer named Kirk Davis, whispered into the radio, letting the brass know they’d arrived. The mobile command center was parked a mile away in the Piggly Wiggly parking lot. If history was any indication, Denise Branson would wait until Lena’s team had secured the house, then roll in and take credit for everything. So be it. Lena’s credit would come when she had Sid Waller on the ground, her foot on his neck, thick plastic zip ties cutting into his fat wrists. It was the only thing left in her life that she wanted to do—could do. It got her up in the morning and it went to her empty bed with her every night. Lena grabbed the door handle, then looked back at the group, stared each man in the eye to make sure they were ready. There were nods all around. She pulled open the door. And the dance began. Lena jumped out first, heading toward the house at a fast trot. She heard footsteps pounding behind her—nine guys armed to the teeth and ready to break some heads. She kept her shotgun tight to her chest as she ran toward the carport. Her Glock tapped against her thigh. She scanned the woods around the house, took in the trash littering the ground, the broken bottles and cigarette butts. The perimeter team swarmed into position. Lena led the rest of her men into the carport. They lined up two on each side. Paul Vickery jammed his shoulder against Lena’s. He winked at her, like this was nothing, though she could see his chest heaving up and down underneath his vest. Inside the house, they heard the laugh track from a TV show, then music. The Jeffersons. “Movin’ On Up.” Lena started the timer on her watch. She gave the nod to DeShawn and Mitch, who were holding the Monoshock, waiting for her signal. They swung back the ram twice to build up momentum, then slammed the sixty-pound metal cylinder straight into the door. The wood splintered like glass. Lena yelled, “Police!” as they rushed in—guns drawn, ready to light up the place.
But they were late to the party. Two men sat on a yellow corduroy couch opposite the television. Their shirts were off. Jeans slung low. One had his hand tucked into his front pocket. The other guy held a can of beer. Both had their eyes open. Parted lips showed missing teeth. An array of handguns covered the battered coffee table in front of them. Neither moved, or ever would again until the coroner came to pronounce them. Their throats had been cut. The skin gaped open, showing white tips of vertebrae among the dark red sinew inside their necks. Paul checked for pulses, though even from ten feet away, Lena could tell both men had been dead for hours. Waxy skin. The odor of decay. The junkie was one of the deceased—Elian Ramirez. His bare chest was concave, the ribs standing out like toothpicks. His murderer had saved him the cost of killing himself with Oxy. Paul checked the second man, turning the head to get a better look at him. “Shit,” he cursed. His disappointment spread around the room. Diego Nuñez, Sid Waller’s right-hand man. Lena watched a fly crawl across his eyeball. Nuñez’s purple-black tongue lolled out of his mouth like a chow’s. According to statements, Diego had taken his turn with Sid Waller’s niece once his boss had finished with her. He’d been behind the wheel during the drive-by that killed a nineteen-year-old kid who’d been stupid enough to mouth off to Waller. Lena’s guess was that, as a reward for good service, Diego had joined in on the fun with Waller’s sister. The woman had been brutally raped and beaten before her throat was sliced open. Murderer. Rapist. Thug. He’d died with a beer in his hand and his eyes glued to the TV. “Shit,” Paul repeated. He had found another body behind the couch. This one had been spared the slit throat, but part of his head was missing. It was a clean cut straight across. Lena guessed the ax leaning against the wall was the reason why. Long strands of hair and chunks of scalp and white bone were caked onto the edge of the blade. Eric Haigh’s hand clamped to his mouth. Vomit spewed between his fingers as he ran out the door. As far as Lena was concerned, he could keep running. She had little tolerance for weakness. And she sure as shit wasn’t going to let her team get ambushed while they stood around with their thumbs up their asses. She snapped her fingers for attention, the crisp sound cutting through the chorus booming from the TV. Lena pointed to the three corpses, then held up her hand, showing four fingers. Surveillance had four guys in the house. Sid Waller was yet to be found. They didn’t need further prompting. DeShawn guarded the door so there wouldn’t be any surprises from the rear. Mitch took Eric’s place and followed Keith into the back hallway. Lena headed for the dining room, Paul behind her. They kept at a low crouch as they walked. Trash was scattered across the floor—mostly beer cans and empty fast food bags.
The carpet underneath was thick with grime. It stuck to the soles of Lena’s boots as she moved toward the open doorway to the dining room. She kept her tread light, mindful of the basement. She imagined Sid Waller down there, gun pointed up, listening for a sound he could shoot at. The Jeffersons theme wound down with a gospel flourish. Lena could barely hear it over the sound of blood pumping in her ears as she stood to the side of the open dining room doorway. Her shoulder was against the wall. Plaster, lath, a few studs. Easily punctured by a nine-millimeter Parabellum, which Lena knew for a fact was Sid Waller’s ammo of choice. Paul tapped her leg twice, giving her the go signal. She spun around the doorframe in a low stance and pointed her shotgun into the room. There was no dining room table, just a bloodstained mattress on the floor with the usual detritus found in a shooting gallery. Crack pipes. Scorched aluminum foil. Spent hypodermics. The sharp vinegar smell of heroin burned Lena’s nostrils. Water damage from a recent rain had caused the ceiling to collapse. There were chunks of plaster on the floor. The hardwood was warped, cupping like the hull of a canoe. Lena scanned upward, making sure no one was hiding in the rafters. The room was empty. Through the broken window, Lena saw one of the other detectives in the front yard. He held his Colt AR-15 at chest level as he scanned back and forth like a pendulum. He stopped to shake his head at Lena, indicating no one had come out of the house. She glanced back at Paul, then pointed toward the next doorway. This one was closed. The kitchen was beyond, then the basement door. As rehearsed, Paul took the lead. Lena kept her shotgun braced against her shoulder as she walked backward, guarding the rear. From the bedrooms, Mitch yelled, “Clear!” Lena tapped Paul’s leg, indicating he should go. His movements mirrored her earlier ones as he kicked open the door and pointed his Glock into the kitchen. Lena swiveled with her shotgun. Empty. None of the cabinets had doors. Half the ceiling had fallen down. The other half was stained dark brown. The sink had been pulled out. Plaster was missing where copper pipes and electrical wire had been ripped out of the walls and sold for scrap. The stench from the open drain was nauseating. Paul pointed his Glock into the ceiling as he checked for hiding places, then shook his head, indicating it was clear.
They both looked at the basement door. This was unexpected. There was a wooden brace like you’d find across a barn door. A two-by-four rested on two metal U-channels that were bolted to each side of the doorframe. Paul gave Lena an inquisitive look. She could practically hear his thoughts. They’d talked a great deal about the basement door. In all the scenarios, they had assumed two things: the door would be locked and a bad guy would be standing on the other side with a loaded gun. The plan called for them to work with their backs to the wall—use the butt of the shotgun to break off the knob, the lock, or whatever was in their way, then yank open the door and rush into the hell that was waiting for them. The bracing changed things, but maybe not too much. Lena stood to the side, back flat to the wall as she used the muzzle of her shotgun to try to push up the wood. The fit was too tight. There was no way to slide it out. One of them would have to use both hands to heave it away, leaving his or her body as an open target to whoever might be standing on the other side of the door. Lena didn’t think about it for long. She tossed her shotgun to Paul. He caught it with his free hand, then backed up to give her cover. She had to put her shoulder into moving the brace, kneeling down and pushing up. The damn thing was wedged in there. It wouldn’t budge. She tried again, bending deep at the knees and exploding up. That worked—sort of. The board finally slipped free, but Lena stumbled back in the process, losing her balance and falling flat on her ass. So much for the element of surprise. The board clattered to the floor. Her tailbone felt like it had been cracked. There was a sharp, biting pain in her scalp where her head had met the sharp edge of the laminate counter. Her helmet had tipped forward, smashing her safety glasses into the bridge of her nose. Lena put her hand to the back of her head. The hair was wet. She looked at her fingers: blood. Paul stared at her, his brow furrowed, like he couldn’t understand how she’d screwed up something so easy. Lena couldn’t either, but there was no time to figure it out. She pulled herself up, keeping an eye on the closed door. She tried to shake it off. Her vision was blurry. Her nose felt like a metronome was pounding inside. She took off the safety glasses. They were cracked at the bridge. She tossed them into one of the open cabinets. There was a low whistle from the other room: Don’t shoot. Keith came into the kitchen. Mitch followed. They were both big guys, their shoulders so wide that they made the kitchen feel more like a closet. Lena felt a bead of sweat roll down the back of her neck. She used her hand to wipe it away. Her fingers were sticky. It wasn’t sweat, it was blood. Paul chewed his tongue between his front teeth, a tic she’d spotted their first week working together. It meant he was about to disagree with her. He didn’t do it much, but when he did, he meant it. Lena opened her mouth to take back command, but by some silent agreement, Mitch and Keith stepped forward, pulling out their flashlights as they stood on either side of the door. They all looked at Lena, but this time it was with irritation rather than expectancy. Reluctantly, she moved over to the sink and jammed the shotgun to her shoulder so she could at least back them up. The laugh track on the television seemed to mock her. Lena couldn’t make out the words, just the low rumble of Weezy’s voice followed by a high-pitched response from George. Mitch swung open the basement door. No one shot him, so he went down the stairs. Keith followed. Paul stood at the top, Glock pointing down in case someone managed to get past the combined four hundred–plus pounds of cop. And then the waiting started. Time changed. Even the particles in the air floated at a different frequency. Paul didn’t move. Sweat dripped from his hands, spotted the floor. Lena held her breath as she waited for some kind of resolution—guns firing, men yelling. Her head ticked down the seconds. Five. Ten. Another roar of laughter came from the television. Weezy again. Then Lionel. Twenty seconds. Paul still hadn’t moved. He was like a statue. Lena quietly let out the breath she’d been holding. She inhaled again. Thirty-five seconds. Forty. Finally, Keith called, “Clear.” Paul’s hands lowered. Lena felt her lungs shake as she exhaled. “Do the second sweep,” she ordered, propping the shotgun against the counter so she could take off her helmet. There was a string of curses from below, but Lena didn’t care. Three dead men were in the house—a house that had been under twenty-four-hour surveillance. She’d spent a million bucks of the department’s money on this clusterfuck. She’d managed to rip open her scalp and bruise her nose. Her ass ached like a motherfucker. Her head was pounding. Meanwhile, Sid Waller was probably on a beach somewhere sipping a margarita and wondering which woman he was going to follow home and rape tonight. Lena looked down at her watch. The timer was still running. They’d been in the house four minutes and thirty-two seconds. “Shhh-it,” Lena drew out the word. She looked up at the ceiling. The bare rafters showed white specks of mold. A clump of plastic bags was shoved into a hole in the asphalt shingles. She heard heavy bootsteps in the next room as the rest of the team came in to see what had happened. Lena raised her voice so it would carry through the house, ordering, “We clear out of here A-SAP. This is an active crime scene.” DeShawn called back, “Branson’s on the way. Coroner’s thirty minutes out.” “Great,” she said. “The more the merrier.” Paul took off his helmet. He ran his hand through his sweaty hair. “You okay?” Lena shook her head, too angry to speak. This was supposed to change things. This was supposed to make everything better. The only goddamn thing she had in her life right now that was working was her job, and she’d managed to screw that up, too. She unstrapped the Velcro around her vest so she could breathe. Her shirt was stuck to her back. She knew her neck was covered with blood. This wouldn’t stop with Denise Branson. The chief would want answers. The brass would show up. Internal Affairs. Lena would need to call her husband to bring her a change of clothes so she didn’t look like she’d gotten her ass handed to her while they chewed her out. Not that Jared was answering her calls. Not that he probably even thought of himself as her husband anymore. Lena covered her face with her hands. Shook her head. She had to get her shit together. She couldn’t fall apart now. “I’ll back you up with Branson,” Paul said. “Whatever you need.” Lena dropped her hands. “I need to know why that door was braced.” Paul’s brow furrowed again. She could see he hadn’t thought that far into it. Lena said, “You butcher three guys and you get the hell out. You don’t stick around inside the house. You don’t barricade the basement.” She indicated the door. “Look at the edge of the wood—somebody pounded it in.” Lena wiped away the sweat pooling on her brow. The house was like a kiln. “Goddamn it. Branson’s probably gonna bust me down to patrol for this.” “You and Jared can ride together.” “Go to hell.” “Hey.” Paul put his Glock on the counter. His hand was on her arm, then her face. He smiled at her, trying to make everything okay.
Lena pulled away from him. She stamped her boot on the floor so they’d hear her in the basement. “Cabello? McVale? What’s taking so long down there?” “Found some money!” Keith called back. “We’re rich!” “Thank God.” Lena headed toward the basement. “Please let it be a million dollars.” A drug seizure like that would at least pay for all the overtime.
Drugs, cops being killed, tension is high and Lena, the one woman who has both earned her position, and the disdain from many, had pushed for a raid. One that was aimed at finding one of the top leaders of the criminal crew...
But Lena quickly realized that something had changed because when they got there, some were already dead and the fourth individual who showed up on an earlier check could not be found until they saw a basement door which was blocked from the inside! They did find some drug money, but they also found that fourth man...and somebody behind him...
And this changed the scope of the full investigation to one that could not have been foreseen...
One of the most startling things Will had found in Macon was not the wildlife, but the divide between rich and poor.
“Well, I’m pretty upset tonight,” she quipped. “You know, my daddy told me a long time ago that wanting revenge is like sipping poison and waiting for the other person to die.”
Everything about him asked, What’s in it for me?
“I know you’re taking heat for me.” “Shit,” Denise muttered. “I wish it was heat. I’m standing in a damn ring of fire.”
“You’re the first person in my life who’s ever really seen me.”
She felt overwhelmed by the knowledge of the terrible things that happened to children.
He put her in a dog crate to teach her a lesson. Took about a week to break her, then he put her up for sale on the Internet. One-sixty for the lunchtime special, two-fifty for an hour. Four hundred for two hours. She does ten, fifteen clients a day. Her habit runs a couple hundred dollars. Not a bad business model. Do the math.”
If you haven't yet read Karen Slaughter, this would be a timely and complex book to start with! Enjoy!
“Is there a reason that things happen the way they do or is everything random?”
Death was sitting there in one of those waiting room seats. You couldn’t see him, but he was always there. Life was in the ER, too, but she was in where the action was, working with the doctors and nurses. I suspect that when Death decides it’s time to take someone, he walks into one of the cubicles where the doctors are struggling to keep someone’s heart beating. Then, even though Life has put up a good fight, Death slides her off to one side. He smiles his skeletal grin, inexorably embraces the patient with his long cold arms, and bestows a final, icy kiss.
I don’t like emergency rooms because, in the end, you can’t negotiate, bribe, or trick Death into leaving you or a loved one alone. When it’s your time, it’s your time.
The emergency room waiting area had changed a lot since I was fourteen. It had become more “friendly.” The chairs were certainly more comfortable than I recalled. There was a flat-screen TV on one of the walls. There were toys for small children in a brightly colored plastic box on the floor. But the magazines were still out of date, which made me really nervous.
When I got there, a half dozen people in twos and threes were sitting quietly around the room. Caroline was seated alone in a corner. She was staring out a window that overlooked a courtyard. “Hey, honey,” I said. “How’s your dad?” She turned and looked up at me. I could see the red rims around her eyes. Her face seemed even thinner and paler than before. Caroline looked absolutely haunted. “I don’t know.” Her voice turned high and squeaky. Then her lips quivered, her face reddened, and she hid her tears behind a crushed-up ball of over-used tissue. I leaned down and put my arms around her shoulders. She stood up and we hugged each other, much like what her father had done for me so many years before.
Just this morning, Kevin had told me that Caroline hadn’t cried since her mom died. He’d thought that maybe his daughter had been squeezed dry, that Joanna’s death had left the girl in a permanent state of shock. But here she was, sobbing uncontrollably in my arms. I knew what she was afraid of. She’d already lived through the tragedy of losing her mother. Being in an emergency room again for her dad was plain horrifying. Death wasn’t a stranger to this little girl. I dried her eyes with another ball of used tissue, but this one I found at the bottom of my bag.
“What happened, honey?” She swallowed. “Right after you left this afternoon, Dad came into the house and fixed himself a drink. He and I talked a little bit about how you guys had gone out to Connor’s Landing to pick up a deposit check. He showed it to me; he was really proud. He said to keep an eye on the time because we were going to Poco Loco for dinner in a couple of hours. But all the while he was talking to me, I could see sweat was dripping off his forehead. “I asked him if he wanted me to turn up the air conditioner. But he shook his head, wiped his face with a paper towel, and then took his drink into the living room. I’d stayed in the kitchen to get some ice water from the refrigerator when I heard him fall.”
I felt fear clutch at the hairs on the back of my neck. “He fell?” She slowly nodded. “I ran in and saw him struggling to get up off the floor. He couldn’t get to his feet. His face was really red and all scrunched up like he was in a lot of pain. He had one hand over his stomach like it was hurting really bad, so I took his other hand and tried to help him, but he couldn’t straighten up. He let go of me and just lay on the floor, groaning.
I dialed 911. He kept trying to tell me not to call an ambulance, that he was okay. He just needed a few minutes and the pain in his stomach would go away.” “But it didn’t.” “It always has in the past, but not this time,” Caroline whispered.
“This has happened before? Has he seen a doctor?” That was when I realized that Aunt Ruth was standing behind me. “Kevin hasn’t been to a doctor in years,” she stated flatly. I spun to see her staring at me with an expression of both disdain and fear. “Hi,” I offered, not knowing what else to say. “To answer your question,” Ruth said, “yes, this has happened before. But it’s never been this severe.”
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Geneva Chase is a woman who you will remember even after days or months... She is a strong woman, yet she has been an alcoholic in recent years... She has loved and lost through divorce. But most of all she's a Crime Reporter that has become the most important part of her life... Until...
This book is one of the best character-driven that I've read. Yet, intuitively I was able to pinpoint those who had performed one of the most horrendous crimes ever. In fact, the ending of the book revealed exactly what had occurred. It was when I decided not to continue reading the series. Even though I ranked this book high and do recommend to some people... For me, it is purely based upon what is happening in America where people are being murdered right before our eyes and ignored by the government as if the victim is at fault...
On the other hand, reading this book was indeed one which required me to ponder and considr the way in which the author interwove the personal within the overall story...
Genie had been called to a murder scene by a detective with whom she had bonded. In turn, she would take his wishes as to how and when she actually reported what she had learned. But she had an exclusive on this murder which involved six people and she intended to keep it...
Genie was going to AA, although as you read, you may not believe that she has made any type of commitment to the process. But she had seen somebody there that she knew...
It was a good friend from her early life, a man now who had been with her through all the turmoil which occurred when her mother had died. Now she saw that he also was an alcoholic. Who also was not willing to give up drinking... But they did meet and become close. He had been married, but his wife had died from cancer--a terrible death that had been drawn out and his daughter had been right there seeing exactly what had happened. But Caroline had never cried. Her aunt had forced her to go into counseling. It was felt that she also watched how badly her Dad had been traumatized and had held back on her own loss to be there for her Dad.
Readers will learn of many different crimes that seem to occur around an actual "Random Road" location. Theft of homes of the rich section of town, a rumor of a sex club somewhere in an old home, and, even a hookup for Genie with a married man. Nothing that should surprise anybody these days, unfortunately.
But all of these crimes are all tied together, and little by little Genie is working with her detective friend to pull the facts together... While at the same time, Genie is falling in love with the friend she had reacquainted with who now was living nearby... Kevin had admitted that he'd been in love with her as a teen, but had never pushed it... He had also loved his wife dearly, but also realized that he'd continued to love Genie throughout those years... But every time they were together, they would decide to have a drink or two as they grew more involved...
They had both agreed they wanted to be married and were moving in that direction... The only thing was that, Kevin had gone to the hospital. The doctors had explained that his liver was almost gone and his time for living was in...the...months...
It was quite natural, therefore, that the issues of death and dying came into the book... Genie and Kevin started to talk about their beliefs, their awareness of God--His existence... It is this that I found the author had achieved exactly what was required of the two characters to be thinking. Kudos to Kies for the personal lives of all characters seemed to be reveal at exactly the appropriate time... An amazing achievement in itself, in my opinion. This is Book 1 of a series. The writing is excellent! The overall plot was up-to-date for today's world, while at the same time, taking a deep dive into how each of us can or could or should react to the randomness of life events...
There was one thing that happened at the end that I felt was not random. Even then, I "think" I agreed with the author's closing, albeit a climax that was not a happy ending... or was it? As I sit writing, I find myself not sure that I might one day go out and see what Genie is doing in Book 2 of the series... Was the random events through this book leading to a life change for Genie? My curious mind, maybe, wants to know more... Do check it out!
I love campfire songs. Of course, when I joined the youth choir, they teased me no end. I remember Jo Beth saying, “Watch out, Britney. Here comes our little pop star.” That type of thing.
Really liking this show...
I really thought I'd seen all styles of books...but there's always another writer who presents a story that is so compelling that you keep on reading, no matter what the pages look like... Let me explain... Or better, show you... Starting with the Playlist... And I have to admit upfront, LOL, that every time I read Per Say rather than Per Se, I cringed... literally...
I keep my radio tuned to the station that rotates between country and oldies. It felt like a good sign when the Grateful Dead came on mid-chorus. Sugar Magnolia. Bobby set to drumming his knees.
“Mason was a good ’un. The kind that die young.” I give Bobby a sharp look, but he has dropped his head, playing with a grass blade, and I think he’s being serious. Not smart-alecky.
Of course, he wouldn’t notice the likes of me. For one, he was two years ahead of me. Not to mention he’s from a rich family, the kind of boy that’s going to college. We were not in that class. But in spite of everything, the two of us did come together. We never dated, per say. He never took me to a dance or movie or nothing. We didn’t have friends in common that we might of run with as a group. After all, I was not the outgoing kind and had never really dated at the middle school. But against the odds, we crossed paths that fall of my sophomore year. It started at a sock hop after a football game the week after my fifteenth birthday. The dance was winding down. I was hanging around till the group of girls I palled with decided we were ready to split. Kids in couples, or the ones who had hopes of getting next to someone, were waiting for the last romantic slow song. It started at last—“Baby Hold On” by the Dixie Chicks, one of my favorites back then. Bernard happened to be standing with his friends in my field of vision, and when I heard that song, nothing could of been more natural than to raise my eyes on him—the angel-haired boy I’d dreamed about since last spring. That’s when a miracle happened because, somehow-some-way, Bernard glanced at me, right in the same moment. Our eyes hooked, and he didn’t hesitate more than a second—he walked right over to me. The gap between us was, maybe, twelve feet, but it felt like he was flying across the whole Ohio River to a separate world where I was living my little-small life. He put out a hand. His face had a sweet, kind of lopsided, grin. His voice said, “Shall we dance?” I had never heard anybody, let alone a kid around my age, say a thing like “Shall we dance?” Now, I know—and more or less knew at the time—he might of been looking to make some other girl jealous. I saw one or two of them, back where he’d been standing, drop their jaws when he put the move on li’l LaDene Howell. But why would I care? It did not cross my mind that this was anything less that a gift from God. When I took his hand, I stepped into my Cinderella story. His touch shot a bolt through me that felt stronger than the hardest drink I’ve had in my life—if he hadn’t taken me into his arms, I doubt I could’ve kept upright. My knees were that weak. But he kept the hand I put in his, pulled it to his heart, so my breasts fit on either side of our wrists. My temple came to rest on the front of his shoulder. His other hand and all his fingers traced the bones across my back and settled on my shoulder blade. I thought I might grow wings and really be like him. I know he must of felt me tingling all over. His slightest touch had done that to me. When the song stopped, at first I couldn’t raise my eyes. After a moment, I followed his hand lifting mine to his face, and he planted a kiss between the knuckles of my first two fingers. He said, “Aren’t you from Devola? One of the Howell girls?” In that euphoric state, it didn’t cross my mind that Effie and Jo Beth’s reputations might of preceded me. I nodded, or maybe I said yes, although it felt like I couldn’t possibly use my voice right then. He kept holding my hand and kept talking. “You like to hang out at Devola Lock and Dam? Me and my friends go there a lot. Come out this Sunday, if you can.” He gave my hand a final squeeze, turned away, headed back to his friends. The world could of ended right then and left me happy. But he glanced over his shoulder and said out loud, “Thanks for the dance!” To me he looked like the happiest, most carefree boy that had ever lived. I wanted to eat that like a last meal. It took a little while for us to wind up together. That first Sunday I rode my bike to the park to meet him, it was like he said—a bunch of kids hanging out in a group. Boys from the various sports teams that were known as arrogant jerks. A couple of girls on the benches—the fashion-plate type that belong to clubs, daughters of lawyers and judges. Some brandished cigarettes and blew puffs in a showy manner. I stopped while there were still shrubs along the roadside to hide me, listened to the boys’ loud laughs, the girls giggles, and didn’t go up to them at all. I turned right-round and rode home. But all that week, I reviewed how Bernard had looked at the park in khaki shorts, his powerful legs in sockless boat shoes, wide forearms emerging from an oversize blue T-shirt. So clean, so relaxed—shooting the breeze with wide shrugs and grins. Not smoking. Clearly a nicer boy than the company he kept. So the next Sunday, back I went, down the narrow asphalt road. River water pouring over the dam filled my ears. Sitting on top and around the lone picnic table, it was more or less the same group from the week before. It was a gorgeous day of early fall, no longer hot but still sunny, still warm, trees barely touched with yellow and rust. I told myself I had as much right to hang out at the lock as anybody. Sure, I did. My family used to stroll over here, evenings. My dad took his boat out on the river all the time. My sister Effie claims he took us fishing almost every weekend when she was little. Too bad none of that made it into my memories. But while I hung back debating myself, Bernard caught sight of me from where he was standing by the picnic table. I still remember how his arm shot up above his head, and he waved real wide like he was signaling somebody off in West Virginia. And he called to me. He had found out my first name. He called me by my name: “Hey, LaDene Howell—!” And he smiled real big. I was pretty near a total fool at that point, but it made a nice impression that he wasn’t ashamed for his friends to meet me and see that he had some kind of fondness for me. I knew it meant he was a nice person deep down. Honest to God, I still think so, no matter all the shit that was soon to meet the fan. It turned out, the boys in Bernard’s crew were actually quite interested to hear about my family. The notorious Twist-line men, that is. Everyone has heard tales about some of my relatives: Jake Blaine Howell who used to pimp out his own wife and sisters, back in the day. Old Eustis Howell who did a murder for hire in 1987. It never occurred to me that those connections could spark people’s interest in my own self. I was happy to confirm that, yes—my uncle was Big Bobby Howell who’d come home from Belmont just a couple years prior. And, of course, renowned bar-fighter Bobby Frank was my cousin. I omitted the fact that my own family had cut ties with most of them years ago. It only struck me as a little scandalous that those boys on the picnic table were swigging from cans of beer. Bernard soon pulled a bottle of pink wine out of a backpack. He twisted the cap off and handed the bottle to a girl sitting across from him. There were no glasses, so she drank from the neck and passed the bottle to her friend. That one drank and passed to me. I tasted it—my first alcohol. A couple of turns had me knocked pretty near on my ass. Everything about hanging with this group was so new to me, I really didn’t notice right off when the party starting breaking up. Or rather, it started breaking down into couples who scattered here and there, down to the cove to make out under the willows and on the little sand beach by the river. The odd boys out shuffled off to a black and chrome Silverado pickup parked on the asphalt. The driver revved his engine and drove away down the road. That’s when my wish came true—Bernard was alone at the table with me. We talked a little more, I’ve no idea what about. In years to come, I would review every touch and sensation at least ten-thousand times, but I can’t recall a single specific word we exchanged. I just knew that he was being sweet, not mocking me, or treating me like a lowlife hick, regardless who my family was. I talked a lot more country than him and his friends, but he showed no sign of caring a snap about such things as pronunciation or community standing. Of course, sex was not a secret to me. Momma had explained many times which body parts were involved and that it was the number-one thing girls must deny boys as a sacred duty. Jo Beth and Effie teased me in the privacy of our bedroom, telling all the details of their exploits. One time, I remember Effie asking me, “How many times you been fingered, LD?” The answer was zero, but I was so horrified she might think it had happened even once, I pressed a pillow over my head. Naturally, she only said it for the fun of freaking me out. So I had learned a lot of racy things, but the upshot was I viewed sex as something dire and disgusting. When I fell in love with Bernard, it truly didn’t cross my mind that what I was craving with him was sex. I utterly believed this was something higher, some fine and beautiful destiny. I could no more have turned him down than I could of stopped the sun in the sky. All told, I went out to meet him by the river six weeks in a row. I looked back later and counted up every meeting on the calendar. He took time to kiss me and hold me. He pressed me up against the wall of the pump station, and he brought along a soft plaid blanket for me to lie on. I thought I had discovered a lovely new world that held a special place for me where I would live in grace from then on, lonely no more. Indeed, a new life did open for me. Just not the one I imagined in those mad romantic days.
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Now I'm a country girl, so I began to recognize many of the words that were used... And we soon realize that a young girl is being interviewed by an officer who starts out asking questions... Then she took over saying that if they wanted to hear the whole story, she'd be happy to start... And she did...
The entire book proceeds from page 1 through to the final page with no stops, other than a short breath (and a bold phrase) to indicate a different scene. I was fascinated by the ease by which I was reading--without the distraction of chapter heading, pagination, etc., that readers (actually publishers) have become accustomed to--indeed, actually demand for the most part...
Then I was thinking about what law officer would actually have the patience to allow such a takeover of the questioning activity. My mind turned to Sheriff Country, and the one woman who just might have the patience as long as she knew the story would continue. Which it did for 207 pages with No White Space to be seen! LOL... Just the facts Ma'am--Just the facts... Well, not exactly, I learned today!
Now the thing is that she and a cousin was brought in for something that actually takes place almost at the end of the book... Yep, but this young lady, felt it was necessary to establish the background which had led to the situation where she was holding a knife and cutting a few places on his body... No, this is not satire, a comedy, or any other genre you might think of... It is a crime drama that happens to start many, many years ago...
I, LaDene Faye Howell, will recount the events of August 12, 2019, including all relevant background leading up to the encounter that I understand you are investigating. I will tell all in full truth and will hold nothing back to protect myself from the eyes of the law. Other persons involved do not know the full history of how and why things took place as they did. I’m the only one who can tell it all. I am the person who cut Mr. Jonathan Rutherford with a ten-inch folding knife, approximately. I made two cuts to his face, or rather the forehead—just about one inch long each, with the sharp edge of the blade tip. Also one cut on his chest. Very shallow cuts. In doing this, I acted alone. In fact, I meant to keep the exact nature of my actions secret. I told Mr. Rutherford to play dead. He may have been screaming when I said it. He did scream at one point, as I recollect. But I feel certain he heard me. I bent right to his ear. “Act like you’re dyin’,” I told him. He had been talking too much in general over the whole evening. I tried many times to quiet him down for his own good. I tried to do this in a nice way. A calm way. But once I took the knife, I finally got his attention. He will surely testify to that. I said it would all be for show. No. I never stabbed, struck, nor slapped or kicked Mr. Rutherford in any way. I did not strike him with my hand, knee, or any object. It is possible he was struck by another person. He may have been shoved or otherwise roughed up in a minor sort of way. I don’t know all details of that to a certainty, but I did not witness any physical beating being done to him. For most of the evening, Mr. Rutherford appeared to cooperate willingly with all that was happening. He was offered food and drink over a period of three to four hours. Yes, I myself gave him snacks and cold tea. No, I never heard him say flat-out, “You folks just let me go, now.” He did not say that. He was free to talk and dispute, which he did. Like I say, he talked more than was probably wise on his part. Yes, from his viewpoint, he probably felt he was subjected to harassment. Maybe even intimidation. I expect he did feel that way. Let’s just get it down on your recording right now that this man you keep calling my “confederate” is Robert Franklin Howell. He is known to most as Bobby Frank. The knife belongs to him, that’s correct. He “produced” the knife at an earlier point in the evening. From his pants pocket, I guess, but I didn’t see for sure at the time. Absolutely not—Bobby Frank did not cut anyone. Not in my presence. Not last night, nor at any time in our past history that I have ever observed. Bobby Frank is a relation to me. I’ve known him all my life. He’s a second cousin by a different mother—what some people call middling kin. We’ve always been friendly. No, we are not “intimate partners” and never have been. I’m aware that you are empowered to lie to me, but don’t bother saying that Bobby Frank pinned something on me. Like it was my revenge, snatching the old man, or I had a dire plan from the git-go, or any other shit on that line. He’s not about to say that. And I won’t be pinning stuff on him that he didn’t do, neither. I will only speak what really happened. I pledged to that already. I am 27 years of age. Bobby Frank is about nine years older than me, so that would make him 35 or 36, I guess. I don’t know where he’s been residing lately. He may not have a proper address. It looked like he’d been more or less camping in the house on Duck Creek Road—that house where the incident with Mr. Rutherford took place. That house used to be in our family. It was our Gramma Dot’s place. I don’t know who owns it now. You are aware that I sent my sister to check on the old man, right? When we left him at that house, I stopped and called her. Told her to go over right away and see to his welfare. How he was holding up after what happened. Mr. Rutherford was the principal of Marietta High School for many years. He was in charge when Bobby Frank attended there, and he was still principal later on when I came up. That’s how we knew him, from back when. No, categorically not—we never stalked him, never surveilled him, nothing like that. It was a pure stroke of fate that he happened to exit the Speedway on State Route 60 precisely when he did. Me and Bobby were driving north at that moment. It was me who recognized him. Well, that only makes sense, don’t it? It’s been, like, 20 years since Bobby was in school. Only about ten years for me. Okay, twelve years, to be exact.
“Baby Hold On” by the Dixie Chicks, one of my favorites back then. Bernard happened to be standing with his friends in my field of vision, and when I heard that song, nothing could of been more natural than to raise my eyes on him—the angel-haired boy I’d dreamed about since last spring. That’s when a miracle happened because, somehow-some-way, Bernard glanced at me, right in the same moment. Our eyes hooked, and he didn’t hesitate more than a second—he walked right over to me. The gap between us was, maybe, twelve feet, but it felt like he was flying across the whole Ohio River to a separate world where I was living my little-small life. He put out a hand. His face had a sweet, kind of lopsided, grin. His voice said, “Shall we dance?” I had never heard anybody, let alone a kid around my age, say a thing like “Shall we dance?”
There are two family/community dynamics within this novel... One is that the town is divided by those who are rich and those who are poor...
Also, one family has divided as well because of two major events... LaDene's older brother was killed in the war and thereafter their father changed... And, the side of the family from which they split was involved with criminal activities. LeDene's father had turned to religion to try to understand the loss of his one and only son in battle...
Effie had long since quit King’s Way, after she got called to account in the middle of Contrition for her car being noticed with a bumper sticker that said “WTF,” in reference to George Bush (“W,” that is). Not only blasphemous language (implied), it disrespected our God-appointed President, so Effie had some ’splainin’ to do. I understood full well this was the same reason why I was headed two states away with my thick ankles and bread-dough belly. Yes, I accepted it. Bowing out quietly should be easier than living under the judgment of everyone I knew, and everyone my family deemed important. But would it actually turn out any easier? That kind of thing is tough to measure, isn’t it?
“Don’t gawk,” Blake said. “Work.” She hit me a sharp blow with the 15-inch stick of PVC pipe. The one she carried was fitted with a three-way joint that left red half-moons on my wrist. I gasped from surprise almost more than from pain—she whipped that thing out and struck so fast, with no warning. Of course, I didn’t cry or complain. Just gave her a big-eyed stare for one second before looking down to the dustpile my sweeping had gathered. She bestowed a word of explanation. “You’re lucky to be in the house, here. It’s way better than scrubbing bathrooms, breathing that full-strength bleach.”
LaDene fell in love, allowed herself to get pregnant, thinking she would be getting married and only later knowing that his family would be paying for her to be sent far away to birth the child, after which she would be returned home--she was just 16...
As time goes by she moves on, out of her family's life and when her favorite cousin got out of jail, he looked her up...which led to LaDene handling the knife that cut the local school's principal...
But, WHAT A STORY! In fact as I think about the method, this could actually be written in journal or diary form as a biography... If so, God Bless the young girl LaDene who, really, never had a chance to...be...herself... Because when you're reading it all from her POV, you just gotta listen...
My child was the only thing that existed in the world for that time. She looked around for about two minutes before she fell asleep, but I know she saw me, and I believe she had her own understanding of who I was and why we were together on that first day of her life.
...Some new person inside me wants to go forth and take on the world, right the wrongs and slay the dragons. A new inkling of possibility grips my insides, it wants to get personal, get rough. Before I think about it, I’m on my feet dancing. I swing around the pole, twirl, sashay, jump over oil patches, bound off a bumper. My toes write poems in scattered gravel. My hair sweeps, unloosed from its captured braid. Wind is rising in the cottonwood. At some point I notice I’m in the middle of the parking lot. I lean my head back and sing out loud. Not that I know the words—
This book must be experienced as opposed to read... The thing is as I sit here now, I'm not quite sure I even know how it ended... After her cousin found her, there was a lot of drinking and drugs, but that shouldn't affect the reader should it? Tell you what, I'm going to depend upon the Sheriff to actually close out this case... What I know is that LaDene made it out alive, singing about Freedom... and that's enough for me... Just do it! See what happens when a writer does her own thing! Cool! Right?
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Note: I didn't get the entire Playlist done. The last words being sung, may or may not have been an actual real song. Also I wasn't sure about which Freedom song was correct...
Tom hung on every word, like he was reading the final chapter of a suspense novel. “Did you see her after that?”
Barely audible Kevin sang the second verse of “Good Vibrations” by The Beach Boys while drumming along on the steering wheel. His eyes remained focused on the flashing lights in the rearview mirror. After a few minutes, the door to the Colorado State Patrol car opened, and the trooper started approaching his vehicle. Kevin ejected the cassette, then rolled down the window. Leaning back, he waited patiently. The trooper shined a flashlight in Kevin’s face for a couple seconds, then aimed it at the passenger seat, then the backseat, then back to Kevin. “Where are you heading?” “Home. I just got off work,” Kevin said. “Where’s home?” “Off Highway 9 south of Kremmling.” “Have you had anything to drink tonight?” “No sir, I never touch the stuff.” “Good for you. Can I get your license, insurance, and registration?” “Yes sir.” Kevin removed his license from his wallet, then rummaged through documents and maps in the glovebox until he found his insurance and registration. He handed them to the trooper. “Please sit tight for a few minutes.” Kevin watched the man walk back to his patrol car in the rearview mirror. “You are doing so good,” Kevin whispered. “And if you stay quiet, I won’t make this any worse than it has to be.” He started humming the melody of “Good Vibrations”, watching cars drive by, oblivious to the situation. Ten minutes later, the officer returned. “Do you know why I pulled you over?” “I don’t.” “Your passenger-side taillight is out.” “Really? I had no idea,” Kevin said, turning back to look. “I’m going to let you off with a warning tonight, but if I see you again and that light isn’t fixed, I’ll have to issue you a ticket.” “Thank you very much, and I’ll get it fixed first thing tomorrow.” “Have a good night and drive safe,” the trooper said as he walked away. “You as well. God bless.” Kevin rolled up the window and watched the patrol car drive toward the horizon and out of sight. When he was confident it was gone, he stepped out of the car and made his way back to the trunk. He delicately slid his hand across the metal. “You were so good,” Kevin whispered. He slid the key into the lock and turned it. The trunk popped open, and he stared down at the girl, who lay motionless on the carpet. Terror was seared into her eyes. Her hands and feet were bound with zip ties, and her mouth was covered with duct tape. Kevin put his hand on hers, and she squirmed. “Nothing to worry about, sweetie, it’s only me,” he said while caressing her soft hair. The girl tried to yell, but it was muffled. Her eyes were bulging. “I’m sorry, sweetie, but it’s just me and you. No one can help you now. No one.” Kevin leaned into the trunk and hovered over her. “I promise you, this will all be over soon.” He slammed the trunk, got back in the car, put it in drive, and pulled onto Highway 40.
Kevin Strand was Colorado’s second most notorious serial killer only behind Ted Bundy. Six confirmed victims, and some speculated the number could have been closer to twelve or fifteen. All the victims were abducted in Grand County, mutilated, burned in a steel drum, then scattered on his four-acre property outside of Kremmling. Almost two dozen forensic scientists and members of the Colorado Bureau of Investigation had spent ten days searching the property, and the largest human remains they found was the left foot of his first victim, Diane Moore...
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Sam’s mouth dropped open. “Cat had a sister who had committed suicide?” “It was maybe a couple of months before Cat disappeared. She told me she had postpartum depression. I guess Haley resented Cat for not doing more to help their sister, or maybe she wanted Cat to share in taking care of her baby.” “What about the baby’s father?” “I don’t think he was in the picture.” She shrugged her shoulders. “I’m just guessing. Cat never really told me anything except that her younger sister had a baby and she hung herself a few weeks later. Haley took in the baby. We never saw or heard from Haley. If it were me, I would have interrogated the roomies to find out what happened.” She shook her head. “Haley never even picked up Cat’s stuff after the semester ended. It was another girl, a childhood friend, who came to the apartment to clear out her stuff.”
Sam wrote notes of what she was saying in bullets down the length of the page. “What was the friend’s name?” Bryce narrowed her eyes. “I don’t remember. I only met her once.” He flipped to a blank sheet in the notepad. “What did you find when you searched Cat’s room?” “All of her toiletries and makeup were there. So was her school stuff. She wouldn’t have gone to the Outer Banks without her makeup and toiletries.” She jumped when she recalled, “Her laptop was missing. I couldn’t find that.” “You have a good eye for detail.” He shot her a grin of approval. “She would not have gone to the beach without her toiletries.” “I was the one who reported her missing. Would I have done that if I’d killed her?” “You’d be surprised how many killers report their victims missing to throw off suspicion.” He held up his hands. “Just saying.” He shook his head.
“What motive would you have to bury your roommate under a statue?” “Seriously? Do I look like a maniac?” “I don’t know.” Sam looked down at Cleo. “Does she look like a maniac to you?” Cleo turned her attention to Bryce. With a heavy sigh, she dropped her head down between her two paws. “Is that a yes or a no?” Bryce asked. “Based on our professional experience, we’ve found that maniacs don’t look like maniacs.” She sipped the last of her wine and gestured to the bartender for a second one. “How was she killed?” She jerked her chin at his notepad. “Have you found a cause of death in your research?” “The police aren’t releasing that information.” Sam shook his head in response to the bartender asking if he wanted another drink. His mug was half filled, and the beer had warmed to room temperature. “If anyone knows how she was killed, they would reveal themselves as the killer,” Bryce said with a nod of her head. “We didn’t see any sign of a fight or violence in the apartment. But then, the police never searched it for a crime scene.” “They only recently discovered that a violent crime had been committed.”
She leaned across the table. “Susan and I were gone that entire week. Erin was in and out. Whoever killed Cat could have done it in the apartment, got rid of the body at night when no one was around, and had plenty of time to clean up without being caught. “Until some drunken kids on ATVs crashed into the statue under which the killer dumped the body.” Sam referred to his notes and found out that her car, a red Chevy Cavalier, had been parked at Reston Metro. Her purse wasn’t in it. “It would have been easy for her killer to ditch the car at the metro and ride the train back to campus,” Bryce said. “Right now, the detectives are interviewing anyone and everyone in your and Cat’s worlds. They’re going to continue digging until they can find a motive for you to murder her. The best way that I can help you is to do the same—sift through the muck to find out who really killed Cat and your husband.”
“We’re not looking for one person.” Sam cocked his head at her. “How do you know that?” “I don’t. It’s just …” Her voice trailed off. “Dermot had never met Cat. Why would Cat’s killer go after Dermot?” “Maybe to get back at you for something. Maybe someone close to you, or someone who wants to be close to you, took out Cat and your husband for hurting you.”
He peered closely at her. “Tell me about your relationship with Cat.” “We weren’t friends.” Her tone was firm. “It was a four-bedroom suite. The four of us lived together for two years. I was in my last year in the architectural program. It was a five-year program. Erin and I were a year older than Susan and Cat.” “It sounds like you, Susan, and Erin have remained close all these years.” He made a note to interview Susan and Erin. “Erin and I were the first ones to move into the suite. We were there a year before Susan and Cat moved in. The university management would place the roommates together. We would get together occasionally for a movie night or meet for drinks or something like that. Susan made more effort to be friends than Cat. But …”
Her voice trailed off. His beer finished, he slid the mug aside and sat back in his seat. He arched an eyebrow at her. “I will find out. Better for you to tell me straight up than allow me to find out from elsewhere.” “I dated Justin Turner for close to a year.” Recognition filled his face at the sound of Justin’s last name. “Turner? Any relation to—” “Susan’s husband. Justin dated Cat for about six weeks between me and Susan.” “Cat stole your boyfriend?” His lips curled. He sat forward. “How did you feel about that?” Agitation crept into her tone. “I’m from a small town where everyone trusts everyone. Susan was the one who told me that Cat was hitting on Justin. I laughed. Justin was a teacher’s assistant for the department chair. He crossed paths with Cat and Susan every day. I assumed Cat was being friendly and Susan was reading too much into it.” She sighed.
“I could not see Cat ever being interested in Justin.” Sam’s eyes narrowed. “What was Cat’s type of guy?” “Rich. Handsome. Exciting.” She shrugged her shoulders. “Justin was Mr. Reliable. His idea of cutting loose was spicy buffalo wings.” His blue eyes narrowed in thought. “Why do you think Cat pursued him?” “Because she could,” Bryce said. “Cat loved nothing more than another woman’s man. Once she had him, the thrill was gone, and she dumped him. Cat stood him up—on Valentine’s Day, of all days. He showed up with an enormous bouquet and Cat was nowhere to be seen. Susan spent the evening comforting him. They ended up getting married a few months later.” “Did you and Cat have any blow-ups about her stealing Justin that potential witnesses could bring up?” Bryce gazed into the bottom of her wineglass in silence. When she finally spoke, she said, “I was never in love with Justin. He was just someone to go out with on the weekends. We never even slept together. I admit it offended me that Cat stole him from me, but it isn’t like it devastated me.” He flipped a page of the notepad to a fresh page.
“Tell me about the last time you saw Cat.” “It was late Friday afternoon. My last midterm exam was over at four-thirty. I had packed the night before. Everything was in my car, and I was ready to hit the road to go back home. But I had forgotten my laptop. I went racing back to the apartment to get it. Cat was dancing in the apartment when I ran in.” “She was dancing with whom?” “Herself. She was dancing alone.” Slowly, he nodded his head—digesting that information. “Haven’t you ever danced alone?” “Not really.” His eyes narrowed. “But then, I’m not a big dancer. What was she dancing to?” “Annie Lennox. ‘Money Can’t Buy It.’ I remember everything about the last time I saw Cat.” “I don’t know that song. But then, there are a lot of songs I don’t know. You came home, and you found her dancing alone in the apartment.” “She claimed she needed to blow off steam. She’d often do that. Especially that last semester.” She giggled at the memory. “She had just gotten her fingernails done. Cat had acrylic fingernails. They were long and elegant. She had had the same manicurist in Tysons Corner since she was a teenager. She had just gotten them done and had to show me. They had gradient black tips.” “I don’t know what that means,” Sam said with a frown. Bryce held out her hands. Her nails were tame compared to the other fingernails he had seen. They were pink with white tips. “Cat loved to try the latest nail styles. She had a standing appointment with Misty to get her nails done every other Friday. That day, she had gotten her nails done with black tips that blended into a beige color.” “How chic. Were Erin and Susan in the apartment when you were there?” She shook her head. “Cat told me she was getting dressed when the song came on and she started dancing. So here she is dancing half naked—” Sam’s eyebrow arched. “Half naked?” “Her bra, panties, and shirt.” “What floor were you on?” he asked. “Third.” “Were the blinds open?” She nodded her head. “Do you think a predator was watching and attacked her?” “I’ve investigated more than one murder where that was what happened.” “When I walked in and saw her spinning around the room, I told her she looked like a stripper. She said that was flattering. We had a good laugh. I grabbed my laptop and looked around one more time to make sure I wasn’t forgetting anything else. She told me she had to go to a party—” “Was she going with anyone?” “Richard,” she said in a soft voice. “Richard? The same Richard who had invited her to the Outer Banks? The one who she celebrated spontaneity with, according to her Facebook post?” “That’s another reason I didn’t buy that post. Cat wasn’t in love with Richard by any stretch of the imagination. She dated him off and on.” “Was he a student?” “I’d never met him. I noticed she had two phones—a regular phone with an account and one of those pay-as-you-go phones she used only to talk or text him.” “Burner phone,” Sam said with a frown. “How observant for you to notice that.” “I looked for it after she went missing, but couldn’t find it. I told the police about it, too. The detective said that they found no phone in her car. Did they find it with her body?” “I’ll check with my contacts about what they may or may not have found with her remains,” he said.
“I’ll also check to see if we can identify this Richard. It sounds to me like he was a married man working hard to conceal his mistress. If he was a professor at the university and she threatened to reveal their affair, he may have gotten rid of her to keep things under wraps. A professor would have access to the campus to bury her under the statue. How long had she been seeing Richard?” She let out a breath. “Off and on for the entire two years that she was living in our suite. She seemed to have money, but her family didn’t. Cat told me she got her money from tutoring. She got good grades, so I had no reason not to believe that. But then, I noticed the two different phones. She said that Richard was a powerful man, and he wanted to keep his private life private.” “But she was going to a party with him? I wonder how Justin felt about that?” “He was dating Susan by then. They were hot and heavy. What happened with Cat was water under the bridge.” Sam sighed. “Talk about drama.”
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In a clever turn, Lauren Carr has moved from "Mac" Faraday, the main character
in her first wonderful series to Sam MacKade in her newest series! Hey Lauren, do you have an important "Mac" in your life? One of your avid readers wants to know! And, we already knew you love German Shepherds but
decided to "go dutch" so that we could meet Cleo and Gus... These two, I have to say, have promptly become your star characters! Along with Misha who truly won a place in my heart... I had to find Misha whose eyes would tell me that she was aloof, sassy, and, maybe, just, maybe, a one-person type of cat... In this case, not her owner! LOL
Seriously, folks, the three animal characters you will find in this book are extraordinary... Maybe it's due to the writer being a fluent animal conversationalist, but if my memory of all her earlier animals is correct, the relationship between the main character Sam MacKade, whose dogs are both service trained, is so beautifully intertwined that I actually wanted to reach out and talk to all of them myself...
And Sam MacKade? Yowza!!! Sam was a canine officer. He’s on disability from the force after getting shot. Goody Two-Shoes was his partner.” “Goody Two-Shoes?” “The female. Gus is the Filthy Beast. They’re Dutch shepherds.”
I picked Cameron Diaz for the lead female character, at least in this book since she may or may not stay. After all, the Series is named after MacKade! Personally I think she will stay, since she was first to make the moves on Sam and even his ex approves! You can be sure, I'll be reading this series as it progresses!
So here's the primary thing you need to know, Cameron, aka, Bryce Greyson, is under investigation by the police for not one, but two, murders! One of which was her husband!
The first took place almost two decades ago while Bryce was in college. One of her roommates disappeared, presumed dead... Bryce was the one who reported her missing, so, of course, the local police decided to look closely at her involvement with the missing student... and never bothered to look further.
Eighteen years later they are still trying to prove Bryce is the killer, especially when her husband was murdered four years ago! So what happens where the police has their sights on one person who has alibis, but there is nobody else to consider? Well, of course, that's how cold cases develop!
Carr has moved into a setting which I know very well. A campus setting for Harrison University brings an interesting type of location for possible financial scams and readers will be both amused and, later, quite satisfied with how that all turns out... Because in the midst of Bryce desperately turning to Sam, who is now a licensed private investigator, to finally prove she is not guilty--by solving the case(s)--Yes, you will not "Believe" just how many "cold and ongoing cases" are exposed as Sam McKade starts putting all the clues together!
Seriously, in order to create a "murder board" for all the events that start being connected, it would take up an entire wall in one of the university classrooms! And it all began when the body of the student who had disappeared 18 years ago was discovered! Bryce was once more the target of the police...
A smirk crossed his face. “I’m guessing your daddy taught you everything there is to know about constructing houses. Hammering a nail. Leveling boards. Driving heavy equipment like a bulldozer or bobcat.” Her brow furrowed. Where is this leading? She did not like the expression on Detective Hughes’s face. She had nothing to do with Dermot’s murder. Why did she feel so guilty? Because she had seen and read a lot of stories about innocent people going to jail for things they had not done. “What does that have to do with Dermot’s murder?” “Didn’t you live in a suite at a university apartment complex off-campus while you were in college?” Unsure of where the detective was going, Bryce nodded her head. “Last month, some frat boys got drunk one night and went racing around the campus at J.W. Harrison with a couple of ATVs. One crashed head-on into J.W. Harrison.” “The statue?” There was a seven-foot statue of the university’s namesake in the center quad on campus. They had erected it on a three-foot cement base. The detective chuckled. “The kid flew over the front of the ATV and hit his head. Got a concussion.” “That’s too bad.” The impending feeling of doom prevented Bryce from being amused. “What’s your point?” “The collision cracked the statue’s cement base. Did so much damage that last week, a crew had to come in with equipment to lift the statue and tear apart the base to replace it.” A smirk crossed his face. “They found the skeleton of a young woman buried under the statue.” Bryce felt the blood drain from her face. She felt weak in the knees. “Cat Wessex.” “Dental records confirmed it today,” the detective said. “The original detective on the case has long since retired. We were going through the case file, and wouldn’t you know it? The name of one of Cat’s roommates at the time of her disappearance was—” “Two other students were living in our suite.” “Neither of them had a spouse gunned down. Nor did either of them know how to operate a crane to pick up that cement base and place it on top of Cat Wessex’s body.” “I was down in southern Virginia when Cat went missing!” “So you claim.” With a chuckle, the detective cocked his head at Bryce. “You know, most people go through their entire lives never knowing even one person who gets murdered. But you, Bryce Greyson, have the unfortunate experience of knowing two people who were violently killed while living with you. Now, what are the odds of that?”
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This book also includes two younger adults, one a podcaster and one a news reporter. These two who were graduates from Harrison, provide the up-to-date tech expertise in searching for clues in identifying the who-what-when-where questions, while Sam slowly assimilates, merges, investigates, eliminates and then moves in to confirm... Of course, taking Cleo and Gus as backup! Wearing their service blankets, which saves Cleo from a mid-flight attack! And Misha? She acted on instinct and rids the world of at least one of the bad guys who had dared to enter her and Bryce's home!
You know, I wonder just how long this award-winning author took to conceive this book. The interplay and backward twists, together with the villains involved is simply amazing. Once again, Carr has upped her game beyond anything I can remember--and I've read most of her books! Her mind weaves this way and that way in seemingly ease to produce an incredible number of cases ranging from years ago and up to the present. And the "only" twist I guessed was at the very end! At least I got that one right...
But it didn't end in just clearing the two cases that had been held against Bryce for years! Several side hustles were identified and brought out for public accountability! Think of various issues that are in the headlines often--and it will have been woven into one of the best mysteries I have ever read! The complexity, diversity of players together with the characters within the university setting lends to the authentic setting and environment that we find in America.
And Bryce MacKade? I was impressed! His training and discipline together with the vibe of love from his animal partners is unique to our world of cruelty. By the end of the story, Bryce and I were both in love with him! I don't remember I've ever had such an immediate affection for one male, lead character. I promise you will love him too! Lauren, when's the next Sam MacKade book out?!
No wonder Lauren has such loyal fans! Her books not only change in plot, but her writing mind keeps creating worlds of wonder in which we sink--gladly! Kudos! Lauren!