Thursday, October 18, 2012

Tell Him "Glenda Sent Me!"

Fans are demanding more background stories about Talanov during his KGB years (when he was a spy for America), 

In response, a Talanov novella will be published early next year. The title is The Spanish Agenda, and it originates from an anecdotal comment made in Greco’s Game.  
Talanov knew it was his own fault that he was in this predicament. If only he’d not gotten involved with Tash, the whore who had drugged and robbed him. If only he’d done what he set out to do, which was retrieve his wallet and leave. But no, he had to stick up for her and place his entire future in jeopardy. What the hell was he thinking?
            Andrea would have stuck up for her, and in his former days, before her murder, he would have, too. In those days, he cared. These days, he did not. So why had he made such a stupid decision? Why had he gotten involved? It wasn’t simply because she was a woman. Well, maybe, partly. She was, after all, being picked on by a much bigger man. So maybe that was part of it, although not all of it, because he had once shot a woman in Spain who was trying to kill him, and she would have if he’d hesitated...                                                Greco's Game  Chapter 4                                                                                   



BUT...some readers will not have to wait! Here's what James Houston Turner says!

A free eBook copy of this novella will be sent to about one hundred people who will agree to read it and then post a comment on Amazon prior to its general release. Thumbs up or down, short or long – it doesn’t matter. Participants can say anything they want.  My goal: to get people talking.  My gamble: that people will like it!

This special offer is being provided to readers of Book Readers Heaven during October

Respond with a “Yes” (plus your email address) via my website contact page: www.jameshoustonturner.com/contact.htm  

Depending on response, we may have to limit the number chosen. If selected, early in 2013, they will receive a FREE eBook copy of The Spanish Agenda. All I ask in return is that participants read it and post their comments on Amazon. That’s it.

Well, almost.

Because I am also asking those bloggers who helped me on my 2012 virtual tour, I have decided to turn this into a contest, which means whoever helps me acquire the most readers will get a book character named after them in either novel #3 of my Talanov thriller series – Dragon Head – or #4 – “Book X” (the story is outlined, but I am withholding the title for now).  All your readers need to do is say, “Glenda sent me,” in the comments section of my contact page before clicking “Submit”.  That way, you will be credited.  It’s my way of making this a fun exercise while expressing my thanks. 

BTW, I NEVER share email addresses with anyone. Never. And my only purpose here is to be able to offer free eBooks, occasional news updates and special offers to readers. There will be no "selling" or flood of emails. That's a promise.



James Houston Turner



Sooo, here's my request to my Readers from Talanov...

I have a gun...and I will use it!

Click over right now and include Glenda Sent Me
DO IT NOW!

or...

I'll be...back...

Tuesday, October 16, 2012

Aviation Historian Dan Heaton Brings Forgotten Aviator Back Through Nonfiction Book!

...A 1915 report from the Boston Herald that describes the
December 12, 1915 first-ever test flight of the Sturtevant "Battle-
plane," which featured steel construction and the placement of
gun turrets on the wins of the bi-plane, on either side of the pilot.
"Lieut. Jones went up about half a dozen times, and remained fully
half an hour each time. He purposely stalled his engine when at a
considerable height and volplaned safely. He made a succession of
sharp dives, always with the machine under complete control, and
astonished the spectators by the ease with which he was able to
'bonk' the craft, turning far over to one side, and to bring her again
to an even keel. At last he fairly electrified even the experienced
aviators in the group of witnesses by looping the loop with the
machine thus banked. The feat resembled that of an acrobat who
turns his body around on its vertical axis while performing a
somersault. His performance set a new mark in caring in the air."

http://flyingmachines.ru/Site2/Arts/Art4851.htm


Forgotten Aviator:
The Byron Q. Jones Story

By Dan Heaton


Had you ever heard of Byron Q. Jones? Probably not... But that is just why the world of books is so exciting! Many individuals, such as Dan Heaton, have a personal interest--perhaps in history, flying, the armed services--and they become interested in knowing how something started, or who was the first...

Thus the questions and research begins and, sometimes, that information becomes something of significance that should be captured, put together in one format, and shared...Dan Heaton did that...

By asking one question, "Who was the first base commander at Selfridge?" to Lt. Col. Lou Nigro, who is head of the Selfridge Military and Air Museum at Selfridge Air National Guard Base in Michigan. He had hoped to write a short historical article in his position as public affairs specialist...

Instead he found a book that had been written by Byron Q. Jones!

Later he found that Jones' official military records were lost in a fire...

Heaton used his aviation historian expertise to conduct his own research. This fascinating book is the result of those efforts, which includes an extensive bibliography of that research, noting in the final pages that he had not been able to find out a few of his questions--perhaps somebody reading this book will be able to help with that! I hope so, because Byron Q. Jones is no longer a forgotten aviator and his contributions to America should be restored and fully documented.

Let me share, first, one excerpt from Jones' book, entitled Practical Flying: A training manual for airplane pilots:
Strange as it may seem, an airplane is not a difficult thing to make. Any good mechanic who can read drawings and detect bad materials can make an airplane.
While that may be true in design, what Heaton's book shares is that the first American planes were far behind the quality of those used by other countries! Indeed the U.S. really had not been prepared for military activities using airplanes. It was 1917 before planes were beginning to be equipped with guns and there were no soldiers prepared to use them.

A young man who had once been kicked out of West Point for participating in a hazing incident, but who had been supported to get back in, was soon in the midst of what was happening in the early 1900s. He was breaking records, building a reputation as a skilled pilot, but also understood and was able to judge the capabilities of new aircraft.

He would also do some rather crazy tests...

Like doing deliberate loops until the plane stalled... so that he could then recover and land...
Or putting the plane into a tail spin so that he could figure out what to do...and then live to tell about it...

I was impressed... and you will be too. Especially since America had a lot of catching up to do in "flying machines." When you read the historic beginning and then realize how far air travel has come in less than 100 years, there is no way you are not automatically proud of not only Jones but all those who came after him to create safe, durable, machines that can carry us throughout the world!

While not professing to be a historian, I do know a good research effort and presentation. Heaton has a personal style of writing , and has done an excellent job of merging gathered material into a book that will be interesting for both the lay and professionals and especially those who have been in the armed services. There are many historical pictures of the time period and the equipment during that time period. If history is your interest, I think reading the nonfiction account of the first American pilot in combat might be just what you're looking for. Kudos to aviation historian Dan Heaton for bringing a Forgotten Aviator back to life for us!


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Dan HeatonA veteran of both the U.S. Air Force and U.S. Navy, Dan Heaton has long been fascinated by learning how things came to be as they are today. The study of history - of his hometown region of Detroit, of its auto industry, as well as the military services in which he proudly served - has been a part of his life since he was a young man.

After initially serving on active duty in the Air Force, Heaton worked for more than 20 years as a news reporter and editor in both newspapers and radio. Currently, he is on active duty once again, serving as a public affairs specialist with the Michigan Air National Guard at Selfridge Air National Guard Base, near Detroit.
He lives out his faith in Jesus Christ by serving as an assistant to the pastors at his church, First Presbyterian Church of Mount Clemens, Mich., working part-time as a chaplain in a Detroit hospital and serving as a member of the board of directors of a homeless shelter program in his home county.
A father of four, Heaton and his wife, Kim, have been married for more than 20 years.
His first book, Forgotten Aviator: The Byron Q. Jones Story, is now available. His second book, tentatively titled First: Thomas E. Selfridge at the Dawn of Military Aviation, is nearing completion.
For additional articles & information, see http://contributor.yahoo.com/user/1202/dan_heaton.html

Monday, October 15, 2012

Carolyn McCray Turns World Upside Down in Thriller, Havoc!

"What was the item Amed found? she asked, then
blew on her coffee hoping Osip didn't notice her
lack of interest in the drink. The Russians tool
national pride to pretty extreme reaches, including
their homegrown coffee.
"A block of stone," Osip set down his cup after a
long drink and made the size of about a playing
card with his fingers. "About so big. It was inscribed
with ancient Hebrew. Amed wished me to translate."
Rebecca waited for Osip to continue, yet he just
kept drinking that damned cup of joe. "And?"
she prompted, not wanting to push him but also
anxious to find out what would drive Amed to
reach out to a Jew.
"The stone's inscription," Rebecca asked. "Do you
remember it?"
"Da," Osip said, lazily stirring his coffee. "There
were only fragments of passages."
"And those would be?" Rebecca asked as she tried
to take a sip herself.
"Herein lies the Asereth ha-D'bharim..."
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ten_Commandments
Havoc:
  The Betrayed Series

By Carolyn McCray


I've come to enjoy the search adventures regarding religious artifacts that are now popular and Havoc by Carolyn McCray certainly got my attention quickly and held it to the very end! So interested that I knew I would have to at least go back for the first and continue on with the series... If you enjoy this type of novel, I highly recommend this one to you. Two concurrent hunts take place in Havoc. One, of major interest world-wide which was related to bio-terrorism; the other takes readers back to the time of Moses, with questions as to what exactly was on the tablets that Moses received from God...

Brandt and his men were tracking those who had stolen the dangerous biological called Rinderpest,  led by Amed. He was feeling the loss of men who had formerly worked for him, men who he could fully trust but they had been killed and, now, during this ambush, Amed had been accidentally critically injured. But refused to tell them anything, laughing as he died, "I go to paradise, brother."

His words shook them all--why would an Iraqi-born leader who was a "cold-blooded, send-children-to-their-fiery-death kind of extremist, now die with the word brother on his lips? He then added "The words are spoken. There will be no hiding...The prophet speaks. Shalom...

Brandt immediately thought of Rebecca Monroe, the paleoanthropologist, who could help...

One of his men had, instead, been thinking about Brandt's "wife who also had the skill..." Which was a telling statement, since Brandt had been formerly engaged to Rebecca until the woman he had married had told him she was carrying his child. For Brandt, a dedicated Catholic, there was no choice but to marry the mother of his child...

Which makes for a tense but sensitive non-romantic relationship between Brandt and Rebecca as they begin the chase across the world...Quite often I found myself trying to figure out if and how they would get back together...Let's just say that I thought the ending was delightfully surprising...

Not only were there problems regarding their relationship, but there were also different goals for each. Brandt had been sent to find the bio-weapon, while Rebecca became totally involved with searching for what Amed had found. Fortunately since the two things--where the bio-weapon had been hidden and where he had found the pieces of tablet--seemed likely to be the same place, both used their specific expertise to keep moving from one place to another.

But, there was still another group involved...the Disciples of the Stone, with a ruthless leader and sniper who were following wherever they went, even killing their own members if they could have found out too much about what the search involved...

Now I must say that where they ended up was a fantastic portrayal of two ancient cities that had once existed. This story has been expanded based upon research of multiple religions and tells an exciting version of events about which you may have known, but not as fully as provided in this novel. I applaud McCray for her work with this, even though I don't want to talk about it because it is just soooooo cool!

In fact, the whole book is uniquely superb in the overall alternative historical telling of what occurred when Moses met God...and what happened afterward!

There are several characters that were awesome additions as well--turning this treasure hunt drama into a thriller extraordinaire. Lopez deserves mentioning as the man who could find and drive anything...even if into the ground, literally... Then there is Davidson who had betrayed the team and was now quite changed and had become like a brother to Rebecca, while Brandt refused to trust him...until he didn't have any choice. But even one-time minor characters played important roles that showed their dedication to their beliefs and history...

Truly a must-read in my opinion, if you're into historical religious adventures... Kudos to Carolyn McCray!


GABixlerReviews

Carolyn McCray has had a long and extremely interesting road to become a bestseller.
When she headed to veterinary school those many years ago she had no idea decades later she would be writing controversial historical thrillers, gut wrenching mysteries and roller coaster-style action/adventure tales!
Born in San Francisco and raised in the beautiful Napa Valley, Carolyn always had an overactive imagination. As a child you could usually find her dragging the neighborhood children out to the haunted barn to make her Nancy Drew-style audio tapes. Oh and did she mention, there was an entire life-sized recreation of the nativity scene in the rafters? Yeah, that wasn't just a little creepy.
Which of course was great practice for writing such blockbusters as Plain Jane: A Patterson-style thriller with a dash of Hannibal and 30 Pieces of Silver: An Extremely Controversial Historical Thriller.
Carolyn is honored to have a seven book contract with Amazon's mystery and thriller imprint, Thomas  Mercer along with being one of the eight books during the inaugural launch of Amazon's new Serial program (9th Circle).
With over 250,000 books sold, Carolyn now lives on a beautiful lake in the Pacific Northwest where the fog rolls in over the water, snuffing out all signs of life around her. Yep, she still loves the creepy!

Saturday, October 13, 2012

Paranormal Suspense Taken To Highest in Aaron Paul Lazar's Latest! Free Today!

Sam took a second look at the dead woman, 
then stared at her face.
Memories pricked at him, urging him to remember.
The long braid. The square jaw. The arched eyebrows.
 The pouty lips. God damn it.
He knew this woman. Or he had known her, years ago.
Decades ago. Something about the curve of her cheek
 niggled at his memory banks, pushing him back,
back in time. He reached back, digging into his past.
Why did she look so familiar? He scanned her body again,
this time taking in the chunky topaz ring
on her right hand. With a start, he moved closer
 and studied it. Good God.
He recognized the amber topaz. Remembered it
flashing over his body as the woman had purred atop him
and stroked him into oblivion.
It had been a sexual nirvana, the hottest night of his young life.
 Spring break. Senior year of medical school. Miami.
The weather had hung heavy with humidity,
making breathing difficult and
movement an instant sweat bath.
His friends had met up with three willing coeds
 and pushed him into the arms of this girl
 the night they arrived.
While his friends balled their brains out
in their respective rooms, eliciting shrieks
 and ungodly screams from their nubile partners,
Sam tried to get to know his “date.”
They’d talked about politics, music,
organic foods, and books.
She’d been interested in the occult
and chatted animatedly about her Ouija board.
He especially remembered her crystal green eyes.
I really was a nerd. So scared.
So inexperienced. Especially for my age.





For Keeps

By Aaron Paul Lazar


In the latest Moore Mystery, Aaron Paul Lazar has made it a little racy, lots more personal, and quite, quite lovely... When Lazar uses magic, he uses it to the ultimate! Paranormal Fantasy at its finest...

And that's just about all I'm going to say about it...Unbelievable! But, quite, quite lovely...




Sam Moore, hopefully, is not a new character to many of you. But, just in case, he is a retired doctor, married and father of two...

Or, at least that was true until creative genius Lazar wrote For Keeps...

Because our beloved husband and father once had a very racy interlude. He had told his wife,Rachel, about it, but he certainly wasn't prepared to have that woman appear in his life about 20 years later!

Especially dead...

Sam had been called by long-time friend and coroner to the scene of the murder. Lou had noticed that his name had been circled in the telephone book lying open near the bed and decided to get him there to have a "heads-up" before the police discovered there was a link.


Sam wasn't quite sure he remembered Ginger as she looked that day, but then saw a piece of jewelry that reminded him of the fling he'd had during his one and only spring break... Ginger had been engaged and had told him that they could only be together during that vacation, though Sam had been interested in much more...

But soon he had met the real love of his life and been happily married since then...

In the meantime, he had a connection with the murder and Lou wanted to discuss the case with him over a meal...or two... But Sam was downright jumpy to talk to her because Lou had admitted to having a huge crush on him in college and was touching him with no apparent reason when they met...

Rachel and he talked about it and Rachel suggested they stop and see her; Rachel staying in the car so that he could rush in, clear things up and get back out quickly. Sam saw Lou's car still at the morgue, but the janitor indicated nobody was there. Sam searched and finally found her--dead!

A green marble is the conduit for the paranormal magic in this series. The marble connects Sam with his deceased brother Billy. The problem was that usually Billy took him into a scene from the past to give clues to Sam, so that he must always be alone to talk. There had been a number of times Billy had been trying to get his attention, but Sam had not been able to respond to him..

That had happened the day he went home and found that a third murder had occurred...and all seemed to be connected to Sam himself! Suddenly, he couldn't take it any more!

Aaron has a special way with all his books, building his characters around family life, relationships and familial love. Readers become well acquainted with his characters, especially if they follow the series. I had missed the reading the last book and was constantly seeing the effects of that omission in Beth's life especially. You can bet I'll be backtracking to catch up!

There are expanded paranormal activities in For Keeps and a new character with prescient skills, which could lead to fascinating events in the future, especially since she already knows about Sam and Billy! I think every time I read the latest from Aaron Lazar that I pick it as my "very favorite" but knowing him, he's just going to make me repeat that phrase over and over. So I'll just close with the fact that there is a reason why I love all the books by Lazar... His books are like potato chips, you can't read just one before you want to reach for another!

Add this author to your "Fav" list like I have!


GABixlerReviews



Aaron Paul Lazar writes to soothe his soul. The award-winning and bestselling Kindle author of three addictive mystery series, Aaron enjoys the Genesee Valley countryside in upstate New York, where his characters embrace life, play with their dogs and grandkids, grow sumptuous gardens, and chase bad guys.

Visit his website at www.legardemysteries.com and watch for his upcoming Twilight Times Books releases, ESSENTIALLY YOURS (MAR 2012), TERROR COMES KNOCKING (FEB 2011), FOR KEEPS (MAY 2012), DON’T LET THE WIND CATCH YOU (APRIL 2012), and the author’s preferred editions of DOUBLE FORTÉ (FEB 2012) and UPSTAGED (JUNE 2012).

Writing Credits:
In addition to receiving publishing contracts for Double Forte', Upstaged, Tremolo, Mazurka, Healey's Cave, Firesong, Terror Comes Knocking, For Keeps, For the Birds, Essentially Yours, and Don't Let the Wind Catch You, Aaron writes "Seedlings," a monthly column featured in the Futures Mystery Anthology Magazine (FMAM) and theMysteryfiction.net literary newsletter "Voice in the Dark." Many books follow these in the publishing queue.

His articles on writing have appeared in Absolute Write, and his short essay, "Word Paintings" was included in the 2007 Bylines Writers' Desk Calendar. Check out the Great Mystery and Suspense Magazine for the flash fiction piece, "Follow the Leader" and visit his blogs at www.murderby4.blogspot.com and http://www.aaronlazar.blogspot.com/. Aaron was the Saturday Writing Essential host onGather.com 2007-2009 and keeps all of his reviews, essays, and writing articles at www.aplazar.gather.com.


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Friday, October 12, 2012

Excerpt from For Keeps, Latest Novel From Aaron Paul Lazar!


Chapter One

“Murdered?” Sam juggled four pots of yellow day lilies in his arms, squeezing the cell phone between his shoulder and ear. “Where? And why in world do you need me?”
Lou sighed. “I told you. The Twin Sisters Inn. And I can’t say over the phone, I just need your…expertise.”
My expertise? Sam had practiced family medicine in East Goodland, New York for over thirty years, but couldn’t imagine how treating runny noses and chicken pox qualified him to help with a murder. And why was Lou being so damned secretive about the whole thing?
“Hold on a sec, Lou.” He dropped the flowerpots on the counter and barely caught them before they toppled. Flashing the clerk an apologetic smile, he swept the spilled dirt into a pile and mumbled into the phone. “I’m at Palmiter’s. Just checking out.”
Lou groaned. “Why am I not surprised? Since you retired, that’s all you’ve done. Flowers and more flowers. Holy Mother Mary. Don’t you get sick of it? Or are you trying to get your place on the Home and Garden network?”
Sam slid the plants toward the clerk. “You’re just jealous.”
“Damn right I am. I can’t retire for another coupla years. Remember, I was two years behind you in med school.”
“Just because I’m retired doesn’t mean I’ve lost my marbles. Of course I remember.” Sam thought back to the coroner when she was a student at the University of Rochester. Short strawberry blond hair, willowy figure, high cheekbones, and a ready smile. Aside from her gray hair, Louise Reardon hadn’t changed much after forty years and five kids. Except she was a hell of a lot pushier.
The freckled teen behind the counter looked bored. “That’ll be fourteen ninety-two.”
Sam dug out fifteen bucks and paid her. “Thanks. Keep the change.”
She raised her eyebrows as if she couldn’t believe he’d actually try to tip her with eight lousy cents. “Gee. Thanks, mister.”
He shrugged, loaded his plants into a green wagon, and pulled it toward the Highlander. He’d bought enough plants here to put all their kids through college. Anyway, who tipped sales clerks? “Lou? You still there? I’m almost at the car.”
“I’m here.” She let loose another frustrated sigh. “How long ‘til you get here?”
Sam loaded his plants in the back, got in, and turned the key. The SUV purred to life. “Not long. I’m putting you on speaker. Just a sec.” He slid the phone into his breast pocket and backed out of the parking spot. None of those new-fangled blue tooth gadgets for him. It was hard enough to keep up with cell phones, laptops, iPods, and every new device that came out each year. “On my way.”
“Geez. Finally. Watch out for the news vultures when you get here, though. They’re everywhere.”
“Will do. Be there in a few.”
He hung up and pushed his silver forelock back from his forehead. Shouldering his way through a pack of hungry journalists to view a dead body had not been in today’s plans. Today was supposed to be devoted to gardening, to feeding his insatiable need to dig in rich loam while the sun warmed his back. If Lou weren’t such a good friend, he’d have blown her off.
Turning south on Route 39, he imagined the ribbing he’d get if she knew about his aversion to cadavers. A doctor? Afraid of bodies?
He’d dealt with dead people before, but not a great deal. Med school, of course. He’d barfed his way through that ordeal. And when Mrs. Tupple had died in her bed ten years ago, he’d gone to the house at Mr. Tupple’s request. Reluctantly. But he’d gone. The most recent experience had been last fall, at his brother’s funeral.
Well, it hadn’t really been a body…it was Billy’s bones, bones pinned underwater for fifty years. Submerged with heavy stones deposited by Sam’s three best friends. Billy’s disappearance had remained a mystery, until it was finally revealed last year. When things happened. Things he couldn’t explain to anyone, except Rachel. He couldn’t even tell her the whole story. But Billy connecting with him from beyond and helped him get to the truth.
A familiar sadness took hold, and as if in response, Billy’s green marble hummed and warmed in his pocket. His brother’s face floated across his mind’s eye. Freckles. Clear hazel eyes. Sandy hair. Impish smile.
Billy wanted to talk.
Not now. I can’t. Later, buddy. He thought the words in his head, knowing Billy could hear him if he said them out loud or imagined them.
Sam turned left at the Mobil Station on the corner of Main Street and Route 20A and headed for the historic brick building housing The Twin Sisters Inn. Willing the marble to be quiet, he forced himself to think of what lay ahead.
A murder victim? Why the heck did Lou need his help? It didn’t make any sense, but in spite of his reservations, a trickle of excitement ran down his spine.
News vans and squad cars jammed the lot. He parked on the side of the road and headed toward the building. The marble pulsed twice, then grew cold.
Was it a warning?
The green glass talisman had linked Sam to Billy since he unearthed it in his garden last year. He’d learned to respect it, and through it, Billy’s interventions had helped with a number of sticky situations. He’d saved the life of his friend, Senator Bruce McDonald, after the sudden collapse of Healey’s Cave. And more important, he’d found his daughter, Beth, after she’d been kidnapped.
He locked his car and headed toward the building, skirting around vehicles and people. He brushed against the back of a policeman when several news reporters pushed past him. The officer swung his head around and stared.
“Er. Sorry.” He smiled at the patrolman and kept going.
If they had any idea. If they knew I talked to Billy, traveled back in time with him… A lace dragged from his shoe, threatening to trip him. He stopped to tie it. If they knew, they’d put me back in the asylum, just like they did when I was twelve.
A chill stole over him. Memories of the day Billy disappeared assaulted him. Billy, on his brand new bicycle, driving down the road, never to return. Guilt coiled in his stomach. He’d answered a phone call from a damned girl, instead of following his brother on the bike ride like he’d promised. He’d never forgive himself for that.
That moment had been the end of life as he knew it, and the beginning of his tortured life to come. The insane asylum had been the worst, though. He hated to remember the way they talked to him, the stupid pills they’d made him take that doped him up, and the disgusting smell of antiseptic that had followed him everywhere, even seeped onto his pillowcase at night. He shuddered and tried to put it out of his mind. Best to forget it and see what the hell Lou wanted.



Chapter Two

Lou hailed him from the front steps. “Over here, Doctor Moore.”
She said it loud enough to discourage the eager journalists who craned their heads to see if he was anyone they cared about. When they realized he wasn’t a detective, they lost interest and swarmed toward the police chief’s car that just pulled in behind Sam’s SUV.
Lou took his arm and steered him inside. The inn boasted antiques and wide plank floorboards. Inside the door, a pine bench with a stenciled backboard lined the wall; an old-fashioned pie cabinet anchored the opposite wall beside a mahogany sideboard, on which an essential oils diffuser sat, filling the air with the scent of balsam. Sam breathed it in, relieved it wasn’t one of those chemical smelling, fake candles. It bolstered his spirits and reminded him of the deep woods in the Adirondacks. He was damned sure it smelled a hell of a lot better than what he’d find upstairs in the crime scene.
Mary and Alice Peterson, the inn owners and former patients of his, had been encouraging him to investigate the oils for years, and he’d meant to, but had been too swamped with patients to check them out. He’d always regretted that, and had resolved to do some research in his retirement that might help merge traditional approaches with those steeped in Eastern medicine. Time would tell if he could fit it in between the gardening, babysitting, and spending time with Rachel. She needed more care now that her MS had worsened, but he was up to the challenge. It was one of the reasons he’d retired a little early.
 He shuffled after Lou. Tin chandeliers hung over a long trestle table, decorated with dried crabapples and fresh flowers. The twins reportedly served scrumptious breakfasts to guests at that table, and he’d been invited more than a few times to partake of their homemade breads, jams, and other goodies. Again, he’d had to decline his patients’ generous invitations. There just hadn’t been enough hours in the day to socialize and run his practice. But now that he was retired, he wanted to find time for more of that kind of thing.
A policeman sat in the corner, interviewing the hotel owners. Alice’s hands shook when she took a pen from the officer to sign a statement, and her complexion seemed unusually pale. Sam wondered if her blood sugar was low. She’d been his patient forever. He started toward her with concern, but Lou grabbed his sleeve.
“Come on, it’s this way.”
“But Alice—”
“For crying out loud, you’re retired now. She’s not your patient anymore, Sam. It’s not your job. Come on.”
Sam dug in his heels. He shook his arm loose and spun around. “Alice. Are you feeling okay?”
Alice’s face lit up. “Oh, Doc! I’m so glad you’re here. It’s awful. Just awful. A woman was killed in the Maple Nut room!”
Mary put an arm around her sister’s shoulders. “She’s shook up, Doc.”
Sam felt her pulse. “I think she’s more than shook up. Let’s get her some orange juice. She needs something to get her sugar back up.”
“I’m fine, Doc. Just a little light-headed.”
When Mary brought the juice, he sat while she drank it, sputtering the whole time about not needing such a fuss made over her. He waited another ten minutes, making small talk, while Lou fumed. When he was sure she seemed stable, he turned to Lou. “Okay. I’m ready.”
Lou blew up a lock of her gray bangs and made a face. “Geez, Sam. You’ll never be able to leave it alone, will you?”
“It’s not like I died when I retired. Alice has been my patient since I started my practice. I couldn’t just walk past her, for God’s sake. I’m not a monster.” He followed Lou up the stairs to the second floor, ticked off now. Did being a coroner make you callous toward the living? He shook his head, mulling it over while they threaded around police, through a carpeted hallway, and into a room already marked with yellow tape. The room crawled with technicians.
Lou spoke through tight lips. “Just be careful not to touch anything.”
Sam nodded and followed her across the suite, around a coffee table, past a fireplace, and into a bedroom.
“She’s in the bathroom,” Lou said. “You’ll have to stand in the doorway to see. They’re still taking photos of the blood spatter.”
Blood spatter.
Sam’s insides churned. There was a reason he didn’t become an emergency room doctor. And blood spatter had a lot to do with it. He took a deep breath and forced himself to focus.
Inside the black and pink bathroom, a woman lay on her side, facing away. A three-foot long gray braid curled behind her on the floor, fastened at the top and bottom with elastic bands and fake daisies. She had been slim, and wore a silky Japanese dressing gown, covered with pink and black dragons that matched the floor tiles. Three technicians crowded around the body. Camera flashes blinded Sam as he tried to absorb the scene.
Lou whispered in his ear. “She was hit from behind with that phone.”
An old-fashioned beige rotary phone perched on the edge of the tub. Red smudges stained its edges. Blood soiled the back of the woman’s head and neck and splashed about the room on the walls and floor. A particularly large spot smeared the pink shower curtain. He felt sick and hoped he wouldn’t lose it in front of all these professionals.
Lou leaned on his shoulder to look past him at the body. “Looks like it happened last night, sometime between midnight and four. We think she let him in, recognized him, since there was no sign of forced entry. The sisters didn’t see anything. Lights are out at ten, but guests are free to admit family or friends whenever they like.”
One well-toned leg extended back from her body, with toes pointed toward the sink. An anklet glistened in the light of the camera flashes. Four silver stars marched around her slim ankle, separated by black pearls.
A technician lifted the hem of the dead woman’s gown to reveal a vivid pentagram tattoo, circled with black roses. The photographer shot it from all angles.
Sam caught a glimpse of painted pink toenails. One hand, nails unpolished, rested on the cold tile, as if the victim was ready to push herself into a sitting position. A bottle of nail polish had spilled on the floor by the tub.
“She never saw it coming,” Lou said. The skinny, bald technician looked up and nodded as if he agreed, then went back to work dusting the edges of the phone and tub.
“Maybe we should let these gentlemen finish their jobs,” Sam said. He backed up into the bedroom. “And I still don’t get—”
Lou shushed him with steely eyes. “Wait. Just wait a minute, for God’s sake.”
She’d been testy with him since she called, and he was starting to get sick of it. He’d come here to help her. He’d much rather be in his garden, or better yet, having lunch with Rachel.
            In ten minutes, the room cleared. One of the techs nodded to Lou on the way out. “She’s all yours, Doc. Let us know if you need anything.”
            “Thanks.” Lou shot him a grim smile and motioned for Sam to follow her to the nightstand.
            “Look at this.” She flipped through the white pages using the eraser end of a yellow pencil. “There. There it is. The book was opened to this page when they found her.”
            Sam stared at the circled entry. “Are you sure she did this?”
            Lou shook her head. “No. But it’s pretty damned likely.”
            The name and address circled shouted at him. Dr. Samuel J. and Rachel S. Moore. 5125 Maple Beach Road. East Goodland, New York.
            Sam stared at the phone book, then glanced around the room. It was tidy, as if the occupant had just arrived. The suitcase lay unpacked and opened on a stand near the television. “Am I a suspect?”
            “Hell, no. I just want to see if you knew her. I didn’t exactly broadcast the information to the police.” She gestured to the phone book. “I wanted to show you first. I’m not sure if they picked up on it.”
            “Thanks, Lou.” The last thing he needed was to be part of a murder investigation. He thought back to last night. He didn’t even have a good alibi—Rachel had fallen asleep early, and he’d read until he’d drifted off.
He leaned over and looked at the books on the nightstand. Standard fare. The newest Dean Koontz novel and a women’s magazine.
            “According to the detective, the ID she gave at the front desk comes up bogus in the system, and her purse is missing. If she carried one, that is. No wallet, no identifying papers.” Lou’s voice softened. “You ready to see if you recognize her?”
            Sam squared his shoulders and nodded, feeling less confident than he sounded. “Sure. But what makes you think I’ll know her? Maybe she was just looking for a local doctor.”
            They walked toward the bathroom. “Maybe.” Lou led the way. She crouched beside the victim and carefully rolled her onto her back. “But take a look anyway.”

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Thursday, October 11, 2012

A Fascinating ReBlog by Aaron Paul Lazar - Free Ebook Tomorrow/Saturday!


Writing the Tough Stuff 
  (Or Killing the One You Love)
copyright 2012, Aaron Paul Lazar - Used with Permission
It’s not easy writing a scene where you kill the one you love.

Of course I don’t mean your actual spouse or lover. I mean the wife, husband, or sweetheart of your main character.

I’ve done it in FOR KEEPS. Thinking about it tears my heart out every single time.

That’s what I mean by “writing the tough stuff.” Sam Moore—a retired family doctor who is our resident hero in Moore Mysteries—is very much like me, except he’s twelve years older and retired with enough money to putter around in his gardens all day. Let me repeat that. All day!

I hate him for that.

Okay, so maybe that’s a little extreme, considering he’s fictional. Shall we say, I am exceedingly jealous of his lifestyle? Although Sam was a family doctor and I am an engineer, we’re still a lot alike. We both love to plunge our hands into the soft earth and grow things. We both love our grandkids so much it hurts. And we both have spouses with multiple sclerosis. There are plenty of differences, too. I cook, I write, and I take photos. Sam doesn’t. But of course, it’s not a competition. At least I don’t think so…

In spite of the fact that he’s not real (at least not in the traditional sense, LOL), I relate to this man and feel his pain when he’s hurting. Sure, you say, writers should feel ALL their characters’ pain. We have to, to get into their heads and nail the characterization. Don’t we?

But I’ll bet some characters are closer to your heart than others.

Sam’s wife, Rachel, shares many qualities with my dear wife, Dale. They both endure MS, they both love to read, they are both chair-caning artists. Some of their symptoms are the same, but that’s where they split apart. Rachel loves to cook (that’s my job in our marriage), she’s in a wheelchair, and she stays pretty upbeat, considering her challenges. They both adore their grandchildren and both love to read. Rachel’s a tribute to Dale, in all honesty. But she also has morphed into her “own woman,” too, and I love her deeply. Er... through Sam, of course. (Honey, don’t be jealous!)

In the first two books of the Moore Mysteries series, Rachel sticks by Sam’s side, supports him when he’s overcome with grief and is plagued by strange paranormal events, and loves him deeply enough to keep him sane.

That’s why it really hurt when I had to kill her.

In For Keeps, the third book in the series, life takes an awful turn. When Rachel is murdered by a serial killer, it puts Sam back in the psych ward, the same place he was thrown when his little brother disappeared without a trace fifty years earlier. Desperate to fix things, he calls on the power of the green marble, the talisman his little brother Billy controls from afar that whisks him back and forth through his past.

Unlike those of us in real life, Sam gets a “do over.” He flies back in time to desperately try to fix the problems that lead to this gruesome act, and over and over again, he attempts to tweak the past to bring his dear Rachel back to life.

How do you write such a scene without losing it? How do you make it feel authentic to your readers? How much is too much? And how can you be certain that your character’s reaction will ring true?

It’s not easy. Matter of fact, since I loosely base Rachel on my own wife, and since Sam and I are really quite alike, it was close to torture.

I called upon my darkest, most powerful emotions experienced when my father died and also when my own dear wife almost died several times in the past few years. I’ll never forget the time the nurse in the ER called the nun on duty to bring me to a little room where no one would see my reaction to her impending news that Dale might not make it. She carried a box of Kleenex under one arm and a bible in the other. She was so sweet. Yet it was one of the scariest moments of my life. Thankfully, my wife pulled through and is doing okay today.

That hollow-gut, black-sludge-in-your-heart feeling is horrible when you lose someone dear to you, isn’t it? It’s all encompassing. Sometimes you just want to deny that awful truth, and pull away—far away—like Sam does. 

...All day, Sam has ignored the insistence of the green marble, which has been pulsing, glowing, and searing his leg all day from his pocket; little brother Billy—who communicates from beyond through this talisman—was trying to “warn” him that something was terribly wrong.

For Keeps is book #3 in Moore Mysteries, and is now available through Twilight Times Books and Amazon.com. The series can be read in any order.


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