Monday, April 11, 2011

Dakota Banks Presents "Pitching in Person" - Tips for Writers!

It's your turn to meet the literary agent. You sit down, your manuscript in your white-knuckled grip. The agent eyes your manuscript skeptically, which increases the pressure of your grip. You wait for the agent to introduce herself and ask what your book is about. There it is, the dreaded question, and it hangs in the air between the two of you. You're up. You're on stage. It's your big moment. You clear your throat, set the manuscript on the table, and get started. 

"Well, my book is about a man who gets involved in some nasty stuff."

The agent blinks and you realize she hasn't yet taken the 600 page pile of papers, the sacrificial offering on the table. 

"Um, his name is Jason Wired, and at the beginning of the book his wife gets kidnapped."

"Okay," the agent says. 

"I wrote this book because my niece's best friend knew someone who got kidnapped, so everything is authentic. When Jason tries to find out who kidnapped his wife, he gets into deep trouble."

"Why didn't he go to the police?" the agent asks. 

You're stunned to have a question to answer, especially one that's a slightly weak point in your story. You avoid eye contact, trying to think of a good answer. "He doesn't trust the police."

"Why is that?" the agent says, sitting forward. She must be sensing some meat on the bones of your story. 

"Uh, I don't go into that in the book, but in my notes the reason is his father was a crooked cop. I …"

"I'm not really interested in this type of book," the agent says. 

You feel an opportunity slipping away and make another try. "You don't understand. This is a great book. All my friends say so. It would be a mistake to pass it up."

The agent looks beyond you at the next person waiting. "Next, please."

You get up and begin to slink away, feeling the sting of personal rejection, realizing that you didn't mention the name of your book. 

"Excuse me," the agent says. "You forgot your manuscript."

This is the nightmare version of pitching to an agent in person. Let's start changing that to a dream scenario instead. 

Of course you're nervous. You've waiting months for this, your stomach is flip-flopping to one degree or another, and you feel like your personal worth is on the line. So the first piece of advice is this: Rejection isn't personal. When an agent says no, he's saying that your work is not right for him. Nothing more, nothing less. It's not an appraisal of your writing because—check the interaction above carefully—the agent hasn't actually read any of your writing. Let's talk about what you need to accomplish when you pitch, and then we'll break down each of those things in detail. I like to start with this: 

Sell your story + Sell your character + Sell yourself = Successful Pitch!

Sell your story

Every mystery or thriller story has heat in it, by which I mean the parts that truly excite a reader and therefore an agent or editor. What you want to talk about when you first sit down for your pitch is heat, heat, heat and nothing else about your story. The rest can come later in conversation with the agent. So what is heat? Heat is the concept of your story expressed in a few sentences, or even a few words. Think sound bytes. This is heat:

A forensics expert has just hours to unlock the secrets of a decade-old murder and untangle greed, incest, and evil to save the life of the woman he loves. 

A woman flees into the Ethiopian wilderness with a baby whose birth was foretold by ancient legends, and struggles against the hostile land and pursuing enemies to save a child destined to unite warring tribes.

A CIA agent discovers that deep cover terrorist cells around the world are receiving directions via typos inserted in online and print publications to launch a dirty bomb attack in six hours—somewhere.

A man kidnaps the son he believes is a cult member and takes him to an isolated spot for deprogramming. Instead, in a psychological twist, the man succumbs to the cult propaganda and becomes enmeshed in violence and a plot to assassinate a presidential candidate.

Some of these pitches are a little long and could certainly use some polishing and tightening. I just made them up (all except the first one, which is one of my books), but you've been working with a story you're very enthusiastic about for months. You should be able to pick out the elements of your book that are hot. The samples above all include a beginning, middle, and an end (or a strong hint of an end) in 45 words or less. Typical speaking time is about 15 seconds, if you have it memorized. And you will need to memorize your pitch.

Hot: The stakes are high when a man discovers that a secret organization plans a series of disasters to set the stage for the End of Things in the year 2012, the year the Mayan calendar abruptly ends.

Not hot: A man suspects a group has a private agenda and he becomes involved in it.

Hot: A woman posts an innocent family video online but the next time she views it, it's been turned into a snuff film showing each member of her family horribly slain. Then it starts to happen in real life.

Not hot: Events in a family movie aren't the same as they were originally filmed. 

Something that may get you started thinking is to do What If exercises. Think of your story in terms of "What if blah blah blah, only to discover that blah blah blah." 

For example: What if a detective works on a case originating 20 years ago, only to discover that his life closely parallels that of the victim—will history repeat? Or one from a book of mine: What if a woman sold her soul to a demon only to discover that 300 years later she wants it back? These could make excellent pitches all by themselves. Your What If might be an excellent one sentence tag line for your book, meaning a line that gets repeated over and over like you are branding yourself. (You are beginning to do so right from the git-go.)

So: Short. Hot. Memorized.

Does this apply even for cozy mysteries? Sure. Cozies have heat, because it's defined as the things that most attract your reading audience to your book. Here's an example, again just made up.

Hot: When a famous chef is hired to cater a private party, a U.S. Senator dies from his severe peanut allergy. The cooking utensils were contaminated with peanut oil. To avoid a murder charge, the chef has to find the real killer, but everything she turns up points to … her.

Not Hot: When a guest dies at a private party, the chef is accused of murder and has to solve the crime.

Sell your character

Once past talking about your story idea, be prepared to talk about a few of the characters in your book, definitely the protagonist and villain. You need to convey your characters' unique slant on life that distinguishes them from 1001 other protagonists and villains—and why the characters you've chosen fit into your story so well. Mention the setting of your book, since it has such a bearing on the story. Try not to make this a dry recital. Instead, have a few practiced descriptions in mind. Here's an example that gives an agent a lot of information in a short time about your characters and is interesting r
ather than dry. 

PJ Gray is forty-one, a psychologist, a newly-single mother, and pioneer in the field of forensic computer simulation working in St. Louis. She's professional on the outside, a little vulnerable on the inside, intuitive, quick-witted, and struggling with the gap in respect that cops have for those who aren't in the Job. Her senior investigator, Detective Schultz, has been saved from premature retirement by her program. He's skeptical, curmudgeonly, not above bending the law in a good cause, extremely dedicated to his work, and will end up much more than a co-worker to PJ.

Note that this is the opposite of your writing, where you would show all this personality using the layers of the onion approach throughout your manuscript rather than tell it in one paragraph. In a pitch, you are in tell, not show, mode. Character is extremely important. No matter how good your story idea sounds, if it is peopled by the dull dregs of the earth, an agent isn't going to like it. There has to be some intrinsic interest in the character, plus visible potential for conflict, interaction, and growth shown in your characters. The agent may ask questions about them. You're supposed to know them well, so make sure it shows.

Other points to convey: your manuscript is finished and ready for review; the word count (85,000-110,000 could be typical—if significantly longer or shorter, you'll need to discuss why); some subplots if there's time, to show the depth of the story. 

Sell yourself

An agent isn't just showing interest in a story, he has to have confidence in your professionalism and has to be able to see you as a person he can work with in a long-term business relationship. Your agent does not have to be your dearest friend, but there has to be enough compatibility to make things work between you. Show yourself off as a professional. Dress like you would for a job interview. That means business casual clothing at least. That automatically puts you ahead of the poor guy who didn't get the message and finds himself the only person there in cutoff jeans with holes in strategic places and a Trekkies Forever t-shirt and flip-flops. Guys, at least pack the khakis and a collared shirt. Ladies, you know the drill.

If you’re seeking a NY agent: For those of you who are not New Yorkers, here's a clue. NYers might seem to be little abrupt at times. Get over it.

Be prepared with a brief, non-wandering bio of yourself. If you have any special reasons why you are able to write your legal thriller or spy novel or military thriller or amateur sleuth mystery with authenticity because you've been there and done that, now is the time to get that across. If you have any publishing credits, be sure to mention them. If you don't, don't raise the subject unless asked.

You might try obtaining advance quotes from authors or booksellers whose names the agent will recognize, meaning not from your self-published friend at work. But I don't know anyone, you say, and besides, doesn't the publisher do that? You're a long way from having a publisher do things for you at this point, and nobody said getting quotes was easy. If you don't have a network of authors in place and you're starting from scratch, pick some authors whose work you have read and enjoyed. Don't aim for top tier authors. There are plenty with recognizable names who aren't yet household names with zillions of books in print. Consider a person from a professional organization you belong to or an expert in your field. Look up these people on the web, write and introduce yourself, and explain that you are a published/unpublished author looking for a quote to help interest agents in your work. Be upfront about that; don't say that you already have a publishing contract. Give a one paragraph description of your book. Don't lie or be coy, just ask. Almost all will either say no (too busy, my editor prefers that I don't do that, I recently blurbed a book similar to that …) or you won't get an answer at all. It doesn't matter how many say no, all you need is one or two to say yes. If you do get a quote, splash it everywhere—on top of your synopsis, on your business 
card, in your pitch. If you don't get any or are too shy to try this, don't worry about it. The vast majority of aspiring writers don't have blurbs, so the fact that you don't wouldn't raise any eyebrows.

Come prepared with business cards, and make the best use of them by putting the right information on. Don't use your day job business cards (unless you have a really, really prestigious day job). On the front of the card, put a photo of yourself if you're comfortable with that. Name, contact info (no home address needed), and your one line tag line for your book. No fancy script fonts that aren't easily readable, no neon orange cards, just a businesslike approach. On the back of the card, if you want to include it, provide a longer description of your story, maybe four or five sentences without getting the print size too small to read. Some agents will take your card, some won't be interested. Don't press. The reason for the photo on the card is this. One of the great things about pitching at conferences is the personal rapport that can develop very quickly. Your business card will help an agent remember not just your name, but put a face to that name, and have a few words about your book to jog his memory. When you do make a submission after the conference, be sure to include your card as a refresher of your identity.

Also bring with you a one page synopsis, actually 3/4 of a page, because the bottom 1/4 should be a brief bio. Have this available, offer it if the agent is interested, and again don't press. Should you bring something longer? Since you're probably going to be carrying around a conference tote bag anyway, you might as well put a full synopsis (5-10 pages) and the first 50 pages of your manuscript in there. This is something that you could mention you have if an agent shows interest, but don't expect a lot of takers. The idea here is for the agent to say yes or no to your pitch and if yes, request a submission of additional material after the conference. You'll be told what type of submission and if it should be by email or hard copy. Start working on your one page and full synopses early. They are difficult to write well, and not something to be dashed off at the last minute.

Keep Writing,