my name is Jeffrey Petit-Bois and i too want to be a poet so i support you a 110 percent, lol, a little something from my works .....
The heart of man can be considered
divine but an unfinished monument
pushing his master to scandalize
the laws of life for personal desires.
the heart of man is a temple filled
of gypsies and bare bohemians
Near across a large bed of sins
but tell me who would believe of this ?
The heart of man is a sacred object
that of good wills possessed none
it is a steel blade
which never stops hurting others.
April 1, 2009
On the very first day of the month Jeffrey submitted this poem as a comment. I placed a return comment, hoping that he would come back and share another...Sooooo, out there, somewhere, Jeffrey, thank you so much for allowing me to share this! I think you have a future with your poetry! Come share more if you wish!